fic grumbles
Had a couple of false starts on the geeky Jakefic. Maybe it's not evil enough?
Anyway, gonna try toning down the intended sci-fi references and committing to giving half the action over to Kyle's point of view (the Less Evil Jakefic was third-person Jake POV right the way through), and try again at writing an opening tonight.
If that doesn't work I might take a stab at the opening chapters of the Evil Jakefic. Although since that one is a huge, humongous, epic-novel-length bunny of the kind I never finish, I don't know how far I'll get with it.
Anyway, gonna try toning down the intended sci-fi references and committing to giving half the action over to Kyle's point of view (the Less Evil Jakefic was third-person Jake POV right the way through), and try again at writing an opening tonight.
If that doesn't work I might take a stab at the opening chapters of the Evil Jakefic. Although since that one is a huge, humongous, epic-novel-length bunny of the kind I never finish, I don't know how far I'll get with it.