Because i'm feeling depressed.

Jun 04, 2006 11:50

So i was reading "I Am A Dalek" last night and thinking about a story i was reading over here which is rather amazing and is about Rose drowning. I won't go into details, so you'll have to read it! 
Well, anyways. It reminded me of the time where i nearly drowned when i was about seven so i wrote this poem. Very depressing actually, but the story gave me another idea that i can use when i write: repitition. Best. Invention. Ever. Lol.........well here you go.........

Seven Years Old

Death give me warning, don’t make me cold,

I can’t die today at seven years old.

It was only for fun,

Now I can’t see the sun.

I’m trapped under here,

Alone with my fears.

This can’t be happening:

I’m too young to die,

But black clouds my sight,

And I can’t find the sky.

Death give me warning, don’t make me cold,

I can’t die today at seven years old.

So what if I die?

They won’t scream they won’t cry.

I think and I know,

They won’t miss me when I go.

I scream and I shout,

I need to get out.

The float bangs my head,

And through bubbles I said:

Death give me warning, don’t make me cold,

I can’t die today at seven years old.

I breathe in the water,

And I wander why.

Out of all people,

They chose me to die.

Through all the pain,

I can see them again.

All my family and friends,

They laugh and it ends.

Death gives no warning, I now feel so cold,

I died today and I’m seven years old.

BTW, this is about DROWNING people! If that scares you don't read!

june, poems

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