nest_of_spiders Day 4

[rosemaryandrue]

Title: A Feast of Fools (4/14)
Wordcount: 1795
Date: 1972
Pairing: Ted/Andromeda (eventually)
Rating: PG
Prompt: "Castle remembered how he had once made a map of the Common with all the trenches marked and the secret paths hidden by ferns. That was like a spy too ... With difficulty Castle found the old trench. The dug-out where the dragon had

Comments

[muchabstracted]

*happy sighs*

I was thinking, in general, that the two things I most notice about your Ted/Andromeda are Andromeda's physical awareness of Ted (always nice in a romance); and also the moments when they're alone and not fighting, and she relaxes just a little bit more than usual.

[muchabstracted]

Also, I think that last line is supposed to read "Andromeda muttered", not "Alice muttered"?

[rosemaryandrue]

It was supposed to be Alice putting her own aside in. She's worked out what's going on.

[muchabstracted]

Oh, I see!

[rosemaryandrue]

*nods* I always get baffled about fictional romances that don't build up an awareness or some basis for a relationship, especially if they're supposed to be successful ones. Andromeda at this point is someone who needs to relax and doesn't have many chances.

Thanks for the comment :)