(sorry it's taken me a while to review, have been meaning to for a while...) I was rather taken with the way your own embarrasment at publishing such material in a public place married up with Lily's at being put in such a compromising position in public. Deliberate?!
That said, am probably not the best person to comment as have more than the usual share of Brit repression in such matters. Am hugely impressed by your bravery in posting and know I will have to grapple with my hang-ups sooner or later...
One of the reasons I'm writing fanfic is because I'm terrible at anything along the romantic/sexual tangent. My own characters bully me horribly so I thought it might be easier to practice with someone elses first.
She’d definitely kill him. Later, when she could get him naked, she’d kill him.
LOL! This was so funny and hot. I normally don't read het, but I really liked this. Remus and Sirius in the background was great as well. Really well-paced and laced with tension. Absolutely perfect. :)
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That said, am probably not the best person to comment as have more than the usual share of Brit repression in such matters. Am hugely impressed by your bravery in posting and know I will have to grapple with my hang-ups sooner or later...
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I still can't believe I wrote it ^_^
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LOL! This was so funny and hot. I normally don't read het, but I really liked this. Remus and Sirius in the background was great as well. Really well-paced and laced with tension. Absolutely perfect. :)
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Thanks for the comment.
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Funny.
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