[Pinstripes] Wishes

Jan 12, 2010 09:00

Title: Wishes
Story/Character: Pinstripes / Samuel, Oscar
Rating: PG-13 (m/m)
word count: 2,139

Written for the brigits_flame prompt of "destiny". It's set in the same world as the last two prompts I wrote, but with a different set of characters. The whole world is one long epic but I deliberately wrote this piece as a stand alone short, so no prior knowledge ( Read more... )

fic:scene, story:pinstripes

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roseletters January 12 2010, 17:47:44 UTC
Yes. x_x Or, as Aster puts it, Oscar SO owes Samuel a whole lot of grief in the afterlife, because it's not like he can give him a proper what-for when Samuel's sick. But after they're both dead? All bets are off. =P

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moonlitxmelody January 13 2010, 05:51:49 UTC
This is wonderfully written. It has truth, happiness and a sort of relieved sadness all rolled up into one. Beautiful. Good luck this week. This is wonderful.

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darthneko January 13 2010, 13:24:41 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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roseletters January 13 2010, 13:23:36 UTC
Ah! Thank you, I kept thinking something was off with that sentence but just never caught it. Fixed! ^_^ And thank you for reading.

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darthneko January 19 2010, 14:48:36 UTC
Thank you! And no... seeing the future has always struck me as a very double edged sword sort of power. Sure, you might be able to make things better and avoid some of the pitfalls of life, but you're going to know way more than you'd want to.

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fawatson January 17 2010, 13:00:55 UTC
It feels very true to life.

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darthneko January 19 2010, 14:48:48 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

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