Hey guys, thanks to uzuhi and her kick-ass Japanese skills, I now have the translation of Reichin Rin'inshan!!! Thank you very much yet again, I really appreciate your help! T__T
ohhh cool! That's from Cyber Slayer right? Haven't played the game but I love this song too (・w・). arrg, I'm at work so can't listen to it now, but definitely will once I get back.
wow, your translation sounds really good! As an amateur translation-liker, I gave somes notes that'll maybe be closer to the literal lyrics (tho with lyrics, you don't have to be literal at all! it often sounds much better under interpretation :3):
[ ] -bits that were missing [[ ]] -bits I thought this might be a more literal translation
[Thoughts/Feelings/Wishes/Desires(←can be any one) flood to the end] Deep sorrow is called Tears are running out Winds of the moment, in the darkness without fear of nothing The sound of the bell is echoing
[Embracing the shadows Days that will never return Resisting order Without realization wishing for a miracle Come....]
In total contentment [[goes]] ... [[Left sending off seasons that flowers bloom]]
Vain thoughts became one with the current wound [[Thoughts become one (with) A vain wound of reality Embraced to heal This is a quiet place When light shines into darkness]] Filled with peace
[Though this shape may decay So we'll never be apart again] Between Life and Death there are two trapped souls Near ...
[[Eternal time... Making sure of this flowing river]]
Walking snuggle[[d close]] ... In total contentment [[goes]]... [[Eternal time... [[Left sending off seasons that flowers bloom]]
Hope that helps (^_^;) And I hope I didn't mess the song up that much
Hey uzuhi, long time no see! ^-^ Indeed, this song is the ending theme for "The Cyber Slayer"! It's an awesome game, I totally recommend it! The story is really good, but I guess that's a given since it has been written by Gen Urobuchi~ XD;; It's really sad though... and very moving.
I've been listening to this song non-stop ever since I downloaded it! XD;; When I first heard it I thought it was depressing, but now I think it's the contrary... It suits the game very well anyway.
Thank you so very much for the translation!! It helps me a lot! Wow! *__* Really, I'm so happy right now, I really wanted to know what the lyrics meant! Thank youuuuu~~~! Also, I think your translation makes sense a lot! The lyrics are so beautiful... I don't know how to express my gratitude, I'm sorry. T__T But really, thank you very much once again! Now I just need to find out what she says in English before the "Don't you feel the breath of life?" part~
wow, your translation sounds really good! As an amateur translation-liker, I gave somes notes that'll maybe be closer to the literal lyrics (tho with lyrics, you don't have to be literal at all! it often sounds much better under interpretation :3):
[ ] -bits that were missing
[[ ]] -bits I thought this might be a more literal translation
[Thoughts/Feelings/Wishes/Desires(←can be any one) flood to the end] Deep sorrow is called
Tears are running out
Winds of the moment, in the darkness without fear of nothing
The sound of the bell is echoing
[Embracing the shadows Days that will never return
Resisting order Without realization wishing for a miracle
Come....]
In total contentment [[goes]] ...
[[Left sending off seasons that flowers bloom]]
Vain thoughts became one with the current wound
[[Thoughts become one (with) A vain wound of reality
Embraced to heal
This is a quiet place When light shines into darkness]]
Filled with peace
[Though this shape may decay So we'll never be apart again]
Between Life and Death there are two trapped souls
Near ...
[[Eternal time...
Making sure of this flowing river]]
Walking snuggle[[d close]] ...
In total contentment [[goes]]...
[[Eternal time...
[[Left sending off seasons that flowers bloom]]
Hope that helps (^_^;)
And I hope I didn't mess the song up that much
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Indeed, this song is the ending theme for "The Cyber Slayer"! It's an awesome game, I totally recommend it! The story is really good, but I guess that's a given since it has been written by Gen Urobuchi~ XD;; It's really sad though... and very moving.
I've been listening to this song non-stop ever since I downloaded it! XD;; When I first heard it I thought it was depressing, but now I think it's the contrary... It suits the game very well anyway.
Thank you so very much for the translation!! It helps me a lot! Wow! *__* Really, I'm so happy right now, I really wanted to know what the lyrics meant! Thank youuuuu~~~! Also, I think your translation makes sense a lot! The lyrics are so beautiful... I don't know how to express my gratitude, I'm sorry. T__T But really, thank you very much once again! Now I just need to find out what she says in English before the "Don't you feel the breath of life?" part~
Thanks again!!! ♥♥♥
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