BSG fic (Kara/Sam, make up your own title)

Nov 01, 2008 10:05

insert your own title here okay, let's call it Socks
summary: Kara/Sam, New Caprica; pre-wedding, pre-'Unfinished Business' flashbacks (so, spoilers through 3.09, technically)
rating/warning: PGish for sex talk (even though nothing actually happens, mwahahahaha!) and creepiness
note: I wrote an earlier version of this for lyssie's birthday. I wasn't ( Read more... )

myfic, bsg

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rose_griffes November 2 2008, 15:51:41 UTC
Hee! Socks = love, yup.

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shah_of_blah November 1 2008, 19:52:08 UTC
Aww. This is adorable and sweet and lovely, with the added creepiness of the dream...Very nice. It's nice to see Kara and Sam having a healthy relationship.

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rose_griffes November 2 2008, 15:52:24 UTC
I'll take adorable, yay! Thank you!

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frolicndetour November 1 2008, 21:40:40 UTC
*squeals* I love this - the gentle humor and pseudo-sweetness. And not too shmoopy - I think 'bittersweet fluff' is pretty apt. I really like how you work in visual details like the candle to make it that much more vivid:

She sat up and peeled her arms out of the flight suit. Looking resigned and cold, she stood up and pulled off the rest of the suit as quickly as she could. He appreciated the view--the contrast of Kara's vivid personality with the gray and black tanks

<--- One of my favorite lines, for some reason. :)

"Yeah, babe. 'Cause socks are sexy." He flopped down on the lumpy pillow again and pretended to leer.

LOL. Socks are so not sexy. But these two are pretty darn adorable. <3 Nice job!

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rose_griffes November 2 2008, 15:53:40 UTC
LOL. Socks are so not sexy. But these two are pretty darn adorable. <3 Nice job!

Heh, thanks!

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lyssie November 1 2008, 21:56:52 UTC
SOCKS. Socks are so totally proof of love. (now we know why she married him)

I like both versions, but this one has more small touches and things about the dream. *gleeful*

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rose_griffes November 2 2008, 15:54:31 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thanks! And the socks... definitely proof of love, yes.

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daybreak777 November 4 2008, 07:09:36 UTC
"Marking where to start later." She grinned at him then leaned over and blew out the candle.
Aww, they are kind of sweet, aren't they? But the bitter is knowing what will happen later. But for a while they had something on N.C.

The dream scared me! Again! You have a thing with creepiness too, my friend. And Caprica. And that week. I am glad Kara made Sam forget scary dreams. I will pretend there will be no more scary dreams for either of them, forever after!

I like your almost-porn-but-not writings. :-)

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rose_griffes November 5 2008, 00:24:49 UTC
The dream scared me! Again! You have a thing with creepiness too, my friend.

Mwahahahahah! Er, I mean, sorry! ;-) Creepy is fun in fic... or on my TV (sometimes). Not so much in real life, though.

I like your almost-porn-but-not writings. :-)

Aw, thanks! Next time I shall include more kissing!

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