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Fic: Sentire (8/9)

Apr 29, 2008 19:40

Title: Sentire (8/9)
Author: Ella Jane
Characters: Nine/Rose, Jack
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Series Rating: NC-17
Timeline: AU from The Doctor Dances
A/N: I have learned so many things over the last week or so, not the least of which is that I might not have the stomach to post a multi-part series again! I have LOVED reading all of your comments, but I am ( Read more... )

fic, nine/rose/jack, series: sentire

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nina_ds April 30 2008, 00:07:29 UTC

This is what I hoped was going on. Any other solution was going to make me very uncomfortable, I have to admit. I am just catching up, and I was a bit concerned about the direction of the last couple of chapters - not because of what happened so much as because of the way the Doctor was responding.

I want to emphasize that I've found this a well-written and very engaging story overall, but I have had trouble believing Nine would leave Rose in the state he did, unless touching/contacting her would just make it worse. I'm relieved to see it moving in that direction, and am looking forward to the ending now. (Well, not really the ending, but the next chapter, if you know what I mean!)

roquentine April 30 2008, 00:19:11 UTC

I'm glad things are working out okay for you! And I hope you will check out the reaction post... I'm actually making notes of what everyone is mentioning, because I want to hear more from you once the whoooole story is out there. So I really appreciate your comments!

nina_ds April 30 2008, 00:25:46 UTC

Good, I'm glad! I hesitated about saying anything, but I hope you know I only said it because I respect what you've been doing with the rest of the story,

And I loooove your icon. There are so many of that moment, but it's usually him that gets cropped out there, and this really gets both of their expressions so well.

roquentine April 30 2008, 01:16:28 UTC

Reactions and concrit are ALWAYS welcome! Anything that's phrased honestly, politely, and constructively serves to make me a better writer, and I'm always grateful for that. (So obviously, I somehow have all the best people reading my story!)

And since you mentioned it, I shall pimp icons-of-isis, who made almost all of the icons I have used in this series. I simply LOVE Nine in black and white, and these are fantastic.

nina_ds April 30 2008, 01:23:38 UTC

Ah - I have some of her icons. Somehow I missed that one. Must nab.

Yeah, I'm convinced that mugshot scene in Bad Wolf is there simply because his bone structure is so incredible. It shows up more sharply in black and white, and since his eyes are so light, you don't lose that much of the colour impact.

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