still small voice [ao no exorcist]

[roppio]

Title: still small voice
Author: riouu
Length: 2037 words.
Fandom: Ao no Exorcist.
Pairing: Fujimoto Shirou/Mephisto Pheles.
Warnings: Sad things? A little bit of angst? None really aside from that.
Summary: Mephisto made sure to visit Shirou’s grave, despite the constant rain. He brought him flowers and cigarettes and something he owed but could never

Comments

[riouu]

I absolutely love constrictive critique ♥ so no worries there. c:

Ohh, that makes sense I suppose. I'm silly, haha;;; although I think I wrote this in...an hour or two at most and I don't have anyone who bets anything I write - but this sounds like an excuse as well aaa. I wonder what I should do~. There's the idea to mess with it a bit but then I don't know if I should or not, though I'll make sure to keep an eye on how I pace scenes in the future.

Yessss. ♥ Bromance and friend!love and everything at its finest, these two. The brilliance~. Hopefully I'll do it justice when I get around to it.

;w; I think it's okay to get emotional about something like that. Maybe I'm biased there though because I am, in general, a very emotional person.

My commas are kind of all over the place. I don't know how much of my punctuation and grammar is correct really, to be honest, since I've mostly self-taught myself to write >A>

But writing is good for you~! Your comments are making me look at the biggish fic more Fuji/Mephi I'm currently working on and go "oh god everything is wronggg" ahaha. That could be me being horribly paranoid though I'm sure the pacing in this other fic is horrendous too. It is pretty much a fic of snapshots of the past so it's probably all over the place.

[kyogres]

I'm sure your fic is fine, though I'd be more than happy to beta read or concrit if you ever want it. (No idea how good I would be at it, however, since I've never been a beta.) I like snapshot fics.