Editing
Hey folks,
I have written a couple of short stories and was hoping to get some feedback on them. I know i'd like editorial feedback on them, but also general opinions about the stories.
PLEASE NOTE: 1.)I really don't have any money for this, so if its something you don't have time to do this for free please don't, I'd rather you get paid for your time.
2.) MY SUBJECT MATTER IS MATURE, and not in a sexy way. In a disturbing kind of way. As in i let a very good friend of mine read one and it actually upset her. If you cannot handle graphic mature subject matter, please don't read it. Like i said, its not in a sexy way.
3.) I am hyper critical of everything i write and automatically assume it is shit. I REALLY want honest opinions about it. If it sucks tell me so, and please include why. Ya know, constructive criticism.
4.) My works are all fiction. They are not plans or desires or situations i have necessarily been in. My mind is a sick fucked up place, if you don't want to visit I'm not offended, you are probably better off.
So with all that if you are interested let me know. I'm not going to post them online, ill send them to you.
reply here, or email me:
jtherookie@hotmail.com
jtherookie@yahoo.com
jtherookie@gmail.com
Thanks
Rook
I have written a couple of short stories and was hoping to get some feedback on them. I know i'd like editorial feedback on them, but also general opinions about the stories.
PLEASE NOTE: 1.)I really don't have any money for this, so if its something you don't have time to do this for free please don't, I'd rather you get paid for your time.
2.) MY SUBJECT MATTER IS MATURE, and not in a sexy way. In a disturbing kind of way. As in i let a very good friend of mine read one and it actually upset her. If you cannot handle graphic mature subject matter, please don't read it. Like i said, its not in a sexy way.
3.) I am hyper critical of everything i write and automatically assume it is shit. I REALLY want honest opinions about it. If it sucks tell me so, and please include why. Ya know, constructive criticism.
4.) My works are all fiction. They are not plans or desires or situations i have necessarily been in. My mind is a sick fucked up place, if you don't want to visit I'm not offended, you are probably better off.
So with all that if you are interested let me know. I'm not going to post them online, ill send them to you.
reply here, or email me:
jtherookie@hotmail.com
jtherookie@yahoo.com
jtherookie@gmail.com
Thanks
Rook