[Hetalia] Revolutionary Lines :: Chapter 11

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Revolutionary Lines
Author: masanami
Character(s): England/America, Prussia, France, Spain, Canada, Romano
Word Count: 5,200
Rating: R
Genre: Drama
Timeline: American Revolution
Warnings: Graphic, angst, dark, explicit
Summary: England becomes aware of changes in young America, making him begin to see the growing colony in a different light and

Comments

[ahmerst]

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

The way you describe France's voice is positively stunning! I think I've only read one other story (and that was a published one) where a description of someone's voice honestly really made me want to hear it.

I also love how Canada had a spine! That he doesn't simply buckle under the affections of France and go, 'Toodle-pip, England!"

I squeeled like an idiot when America said he loved England, as well.

THIS IS TOO FABULOUS. I can't believe the next chapter is the end. My mind refuses to wrap around it!

[masanami]

I LOVE YOU TOO!

I'm so glad you like it ♥ I really wanted to do France justice and I think his voice is important (I just imagine he's always got his sexy voice on) so I'm glad that showed! AND YES CANADA HAS A SPINE! I like my Canada like that :) I had to put that touch there at the end with America and England, a light at the end of the tunnel so to speak.

And I know, I can't believe its actually almost finished! I've had the last chapter pictured in my mind since last year and it's exciting and bittersweet that's its almost here <333

Will Write Coherent Response Once She Gets Over the Awesome that is This Chapter

[amouisrafel]

*dies*

Re: Will Write Coherent Response Once She Gets Over the Awesome that is This Chapter

[masanami]

eeek don't die!

[miss_aztec57]

YAY AN UPDATE *hyperventilates* Great timing considering I was just re-reading the chapters yesterday. :D Anyway, I love this story like you wouldn't believe! God, you amaze me. The writing is just brilliant. BRILLIANT I TELLS YOU.

Can't WAIT for the next chapter.

[masanami]

yay ~ thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥ *blushes* thats so nice of you :)

[blulious]

Oh my gosh!! The ending is so close!! This cannot be....

Haha. I never thought I find Canada's manipulative side so attractive. And Com'on, Maple!! France is too fabulous to refuse!!

Eeek, everything is reaching the climax, which I'm totally stoke for!!

P.S. Sorry for the shorter-than-usual-comment, I'm pretty dazed from the morning. =u=;;

[masanami]

I know its almost here! Can't believe it either...

Yeah, I like my Canada with some spine and my France...well...like France LOL

And no worries hun <3

[star_jinin]

<33333 Feels like my birthday came early!

And I totally saw Canada's reaction coming, lol. But still, FRANCE. Oh god, you need to write more of Francis! And have I mentioned how utterly awesome Prussia is when you write him?

I honestly didn't expect that confession happening so soon (Because we all know the treaty of Paris happened anyway). Or maybe Al thinks that England needed to be at peace with the knowledge that he loves him in order to be ABLE to let America go? That would be so England. If you hate me, I keep you as my boytoy, if you love me, I'll be okay with you leaving because we'll still have that connection.

Keep going, masa! I can't wait to see the end! (Though will we be seeing the Yorktown in the rain scene?)

[masanami]

You liked France? Eeeek I'm glad because I actually think he's kinda tough to write. He's way smoother than I am. Prussia is just plain fun to write ♥

Well...considering how the final chapter ends...okay, well, hopefully it'll make sense in the end since I don't want to spoil anything. But yeah, there definitely needed to be some clarification between them.

<333