[Uraboku] Bruises and Bitemarks (2/?)

Nov 04, 2010 01:04

Title: Bruises and Bitemarks
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei, mentions of Senshirou/Kuroto, Takashiro, Tachibana, and others
Word Count: 9,050
Rating: R
Warnings: Host AU. Suggestive material.
Summary: Shusei's the perfect host and Hotsuma's the perfect person to ruin everything for him.

Those words were as dangerous as the person who spoke them. )

fic series: bruises and bitemarks, series: uraboku, type: multi-chapter, pairing: hotsuma/shusei

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haru_kurofai November 4 2010, 21:54:48 UTC
Honey, you have made my day ♥ *glomps* I've been looking forward to your fic for sooooooooo long, and it has definitely carried me through yet another shitty day at work ♥ You know, it didnt feel like 9000 words at all! The lines just flowed so perfectly, I could see the scenes clearly in my head, and it all happened so naturally. Everything seemed so right ♥

Kuroto is adorable ♥♥♥ and hello Sen-chan XDDDD Kuroto's tsundere moments are so much love *giggles*

I really really love the way Hotsu waited for Shusei outside, the way he thought Shusei was out of reach yet he still tried his best to get close to him *swoons* Shusei letting his masks slip in front of Hotsu, that's certainly a good sign for the beginning of Hotsu x Shusei love ♥

Excuse my mushy brain and incoherent comment right now, bb you're amazing ♥♥♥♥ *clings* (time to get writing XDDD before bedtime orz)

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masanami November 4 2010, 23:41:31 UTC
*clings* ♥ !!

Ahhh I'm SO sorry for the long wait too! I don't know what happened but I just got carried away and before I knew it I had reached 9,000 words! I never write such long chapters for multi-chapter fics! Hopefully I won't go so crazy next time and get the chapter out a bit quicker^^ I'm glad it didn't seem too long. I hate those writings where it just feels like it will never end and it just carries on pointlessly...and I was a bit worried that might happen orz

I'm glad you enjoyed Kuroto and Senshirou's scene! Haha I had to include some tsundere Kuroto in there because he is so cute~ of course, plenty of HotsuShu as well ♥ ♥

Thank you so much! I appreciate your thoughts and words like whoah! ajhsakjhd I am so excited for this new writing from YOU! *sends you lots of inspiration*

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haru_kurofai November 5 2010, 21:13:31 UTC
Ehehe ♥ *glomps back*

Don't be sorry at all bb! It's certainly worth the wait, and I'm looking forward to more! Everyone are so in-character, and Sen-chan too! I feel sorry for him sometimes... Tsundere Kuroto is love, but Sen-chan deserves some tender loving care too! I hope he gets plenty behind closed doors ♥ *giggles*

Thank you for sending me loads of inspirations XD I value your words and thoughts so much, together with a few other special people (♥), every time I write something I wonder if you girls would like it ♥ And I refresh my post like mad to wait for your feedback cos it means so much to me *hugs*

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masanami November 7 2010, 14:14:46 UTC
ahhh I feel sorry for Senshirou too! Poor boy just loves that tsundere to pieces though :) and I love him for it LOL

Oh sweetheart you are the most precious! I am SO the same way with my special people as well (you, of course, being one ♥) and I wait for your opinions more so than anyone else--because it would make nothing but happy to know you simply enjoyed something I wrote :) *hugs tightly*

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haru_kurofai November 8 2010, 00:13:02 UTC
Aww darling *hugs back* thank you, your words mean sooo much to me!

Sen-chan needs more love, he most certainly does! So he'll get some in my fics LOL I'm nearly done with my new oneshot. I wanted to finish it and post it before I go to bed but the silly router is on strike -3- oh well, gives me the chance to proof-read it again. It should be up by tomorrow or the day after. Btw it ended up having sexy times again lol

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lulubg November 5 2010, 19:49:10 UTC
Hey!
I can't stop looking at your icon.. *.*
Can you tell me where can I find this pic? ^^'

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haru_kurofai November 5 2010, 21:14:33 UTC
XDDD I can gawk at it all day too! ♥
I came across it randomly on a forum, but I can't find it anymore... ;A; *sobs*

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lulubg November 6 2010, 05:05:34 UTC
Aww.. Ok, thanks anyway!
Will have to keep staring at your icon then! ;)

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