[Uraboku] Bruises and Bitemarks (2/?)

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Bruises and Bitemarks
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei, mentions of Senshirou/Kuroto, Takashiro, Tachibana, and others
Word Count: 9,050
Rating: R
Warnings: Host AU. Suggestive material.
Summary: Shusei's the perfect host and Hotsuma's the perfect person to ruin everything for him.

Comments

[anima57]

this is just amazing work. I have tried to read fan fiction before from other stories, but only once did it move me, until now. you have kept the people genuine and real and connected to the original story (dvd for me), but have taken them in a different direction that is plausible and believable as characters and as a development in the story. the host club, the emotional distance, the unexpected intensity of emotions are all exactly right. I cannot wait to read more. one question though, I do not remember who Kuroto is and his actions in this story make me want to learn more. thanks so much for this story. if you have other work out, I would be interested in reading it. thanks again. cindy

[masanami]

Whoa--what a compliment! Thank you SO much ♥ Being able to move a reader is such a huge compliment as a writer and I thank you for sharing those feelings with me! It's been a real struggle on my part to keep everything balanced, in-character, and canon (well as canon as an AU can get lol) and being recognized for that is such a treat^^

Kuroto and Senshirou come in a bit later, around episode 13-14 I believe? Bit of a spoiler but in canon they are both another pair of guardians for Yuki--Senshirou being a new guardian that replaced Kuroto's previous guardian after his partner was killed.

[anima57]

I remember Kuroto and Sehirou now, and K was prickly! I have only seen the anime once and really hope it will be released in the US. if you are not already a published or attempting to be published writer, I would encourage you to give it a shot. thanks again for a moving story--cannot wait for more.

[masanami]

Oh wow thank you for even thinking my writing is publishing-worthy! It's certainly an eventual achievement I would like to one day accomplish :)

[masanami]

ahhh...so sorry but I just realized I forgot to answer one of your questions! I do have other Uraboku writings that I've posted^^ They are all located here if you want to check them out <3