[Uraboku] Bruises and Bitemarks (1/?)

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Bruises and Bitemarks
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei, mentions of Senshirou/Kuroto, Takashiro, Tachibana, and others
Word Count: 6,920
Rating: R
Warnings: Host AU. Suggestive material. Possibly NC-17.
Summary: Shusei's the perfect host and Hotsuma's the perfect person to ruin everything for him.
Author's Note: This is going to be

Comments

[mitsu_san]

OH GOD, I'M AFRAID I LOVE YOU SO MUCH HARDER THAN BEFORE, BB!!
~~janffnfamda!!!

First of all, you're aweeesome.
I always knew that you're a GOD but you left me speechless from the first line to the last line, it was THAT EPIC. I needed to remind myself to take breath constantly~~ashadhdb~~! This is ONE of the fics I'm gonna wait for days and weeks and am SO SO goddamn foward to reading the next continuation, BB ♥♥♥. I'm already craving for MOAR; wah it HURTS to wait because you make me need it like AIR DDDDD: XDDHAHAHA!

I'm lost in your words; actually had to realize that I wasn't in the club but in my tiny room reading this HAHA. All the while you make me bound to this fanfic; fascinated of the life of a host and the way you portrayed it.

The introduction was brilliant. All the girls; the way our Shusei jumped from one table to the next table; how Shusei knew how to flatter a girl; how he simply makes a girl HIS without feeling anything. I can SO picture this. Immediately, I saw flashes of colors and the scene was suddenly SO graphic; I so can feel the beats of the music while reading the lines bit by bit. Actually I set myself in the mood, chose some club songs and almost exploded by the sheer awesomness of both the fanfic and the music ♥ *__*

And then we saw Hotsu's POV.
I suddenly laughed about the photoshopped remark XDDDDDDDDDDD HAHAHA!!
Besides, I love, omg I so~ love, how you described how he fell for Shusei that Shusei could stir a feeling in him.
And I hadn't read everything at that time and was already squealing HARD HAHAH oh my.

HAHAH Kurotooooooooooo and Tachibana ♥ ♥!
So happy that you added them in the fic XD! If it was real, I would have flown all the way to Tokyo just for THIS host bar HAHAHXDDDD.

asdafsdafsfa SHUSEI BABY.
OH YES, he is so MUCH BETTER in real 8D. He doesn't even need Photoshop to be this PERFECT*___*. Hotsuma, too bad he couldn't disappoint you and now you HAVE to prepare to come with tons of money back XD! (Poor him)

GAAH, I was so in awe as soon as Shusei entered the room and his delicate gestures were enough to send me off to heaven. HAHAH SUCH a damn cocktease

[mitsu_san]

ASDFASDFDSASDF and OMG, he moaned, he MOANED! WHAT A DELICIOUS IMAGINATION *_*
*is dead* FUCK, it makes me insanely happy to see that Hotsuma COULD make Shusei feel SOMETHING ;_; ISOLOVETHISREACTION~~WAH

...Girl, seriously, I always loved your fanfics, but this is thousands of times BETTER.

HOW DO YOU DO THIS? WHY SO AWESOME? Can't you BE LESS awesome, WOMAN?

Because I was stopping at almost every 3. line and thought that you are SIMPLY my HotsuShu GOD HAHAH! I was as curious as Hotsuma and amazed by it's unfamiliar place. But you know, it's YOU who gave me such nice imagination. You exactly showed again WHY you are such a good talented author and I can feel every bit of your EPICNESS in this fanfic. Speaking of it, I wasn't thinking of it as a fanfic but as a novel because it was THAT high-quality and beautiful to me♥.

I like the flow of Hotsuma's thoughts. The way he KNEW that he was far better than showing up in such a place but could't help it because this shameful gorgeous host just wouldn't go out of his head. The conflicts in his mind; the way he acted, the way he moved..I am speechless how IC your Hotsuma is but also the other UraBoku characters.

Gah, my comment is so silly and I feel so silly for being bad giving feedbacks but I hope you could feel how much I LOVE this, honey <333. AU was always my favourite taste BUT I coudln't help but to even connect this with the original story because they CAN reincarnate and meeting each other again this time, in such a complicated place--- OH MY GOD, my fanheart can't handle it ♥

Hon, I love youuuuuu and this fic <3333 It was so WORTH the wait, thank you so much ♥
Looking forward to reading the next update, I really do hard <3

(And you might be shocked as soon you saw your email inbox but I had difficulties with the layout of my comment. It rather looked like codes than texts because all the spaces which I put between the paragraphs disappeared after I sent it off D:. I tried to fix it but it won't change and the only way I found out is to split my comment in two halfs, WTF. Yeah I'm an idiot, I pay attention to such little things xD;;)

[masanami]

asjdhakhd~ I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT BB ♥ because I, like, kept saying I would post it and then it kept getting delayed and delayed but now the first chapter is finally finished!

*feels so speechless* I don't even know how to respond to your comment because all I am doing here is sitting here and grinning like an idiot and feeling all sorts of happy that my good friend enjoyed the first chapter so much and gah~

I am SO happy that you just got the Shusei I wanted to portray. It is SO important that I set up his character correctly in this first chapter (hence why it took me so long to get it posted and the choice of Hotsuma's POV for the majority of the chapter) because everything in this fic is based off of Hotsuma's view and assumptions of Shusei throughout this first chapter. Not feeling anything for the women that he makes his own, being close physically without the emotional involvement (even spitting the same lines to Hotsuma as he does the girls) are ALL so important to the character that Shusei will develop in this story and how that will tangle into his relationship with Hotsuma.

HAHA yes the photoshop remark had to be included ♥ hurr-hurr but there will be more on that later~

Oh gosh writing Shusei in their first meeting SO hard but I'm glad he seemed to come across just as I wanted^^ And the kiss, of course, had to be hot. The thought of Shusei moaning over Hotsu always makes me grin~

adjhakshdkha ♥ ILU and all your amazing insight into the story and GAH I am just SO HAPPY you liked it!! Your comment isn't silly at all, it's leaving this author totally speechless and giddy and grinning stupidly over making her friends happy with something she's written. Promise ♥

haha no worries, I do the same damn thing. I am so picky with the presentation LOL