Comments | roo1965: Shep Wump Day 5

roo1965

Shep Wump Day 5 - Toxic

Jan 14, 2009 21:42

The team smile stiffly at the treaty committee and at the hot drinks on the table before them, steam wafting gently from them. Rodney’s checking for citrus content and Sheppard wonders when things are going to get turned around, like guns appearing or them being knocked out. This is the Pegasus galaxy after all and they’ve learned from bitter, ( Read more... )

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kriadydragon January 15 2009, 06:00:40 UTC

Good thing McKay knew what to do. Poor Shep, we do love to hurt him so:D.

roo1965 January 16 2009, 21:36:25 UTC

YES, we do! See, Rodney can be useful *smirk*....

Shep Wump Day 5 - Toxic aqualegia January 15 2009, 17:42:50 UTC

Poor John, being the only one who has a reaction. It's a good thing Rodney knew what to do :)

Re: Shep Wump Day 5 - Toxic roo1965 January 16 2009, 21:37:52 UTC

Yeah i know it's a bit of a cliche- John's ATA gene more of a pain than a treasure- but it aws too good to miss.

chensuu January 15 2009, 23:31:33 UTC

Very nice and whumpy. Poor Sheppard. His confusion really came across in this.

roo1965 January 16 2009, 21:39:11 UTC

So glad it came across as i intended. The Water fic didn't come out as i wanted, i may fiddle with it later...

roxanneb January 24 2009, 06:47:49 UTC

I noticed you said this was un-beta'd. It wasn't bad, but I'm a beta if you need one. Great fic, I'm really enjoying these!

roo1965 January 24 2009, 20:24:16 UTC

Thanks for the offer of a beta, but at present these are being written spur of the moment at the point of a gun, so there's not alot of time for back & forth of beta'ing. But I'll bear you in mind in the future when I write a longer piece not part of a one-a-day-marathon!