[Fic] I Love The Sound of You Walking Away

May 20, 2006 12:51

While I was taking a (long, possibly permanent break) from my Loveless project, someone told me that I should do another NaruIno since I like it so much. But then someone else said that I should do femmeslash while I'm still on that kick, and then all the angry female singers I was listening to convinced me that slut!Ino is the way to go, so I ( Read more... )

het, ankoino, inosaku, yamanaka ino, naruino, naruto, nejiino, femslash, fic, temaino, shikaino

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Masterpiece mystifyingbliss May 22 2007, 23:00:51 UTC
Oh, how I love you.

I don't know how you manage, but I envy you greatly. Could I borrow your talent for just a hours, maybe a day? It would be awesome. You're a genius, know that? Congrats on yet another masterpiece.

I picked out the best parts...

1 - Ino pours more cream into her untouched coffee, watches the thread of off-white swirl like a vortex, and wishes she could wash every memory she has of their relationship down its current.

2 - She doesn't ask him who his ghost is, however, knowing he'll probably ask about hers.

3 - with the mutually implicit knowledge that two wrongs don't make a right.

4 - And that is how Ino knows the difference between a girl and a woman: the acknowledgement of the sacred law of no strings attached.

5 - "I'll burn it as long as I can hold it."

6 - Ino has the sudden, absurd wish for Temari to ask her out to dinner.

But that's not the way the game works.

7 - Tonight the club is busy, the dance floor crammed with sleek nubile bodies writhing to the heavy bass beats spilling from the club's sound system.

8 - Mouths 'What the fuck' to herself.

9 - "Don't kid yourself, Ino. You were born to burn the candle."

10 - All of a sudden, her heart is beating a fast tattoo against the walls of her ribcage. She has never been here before.

When Naruto laughs, the sound is like the tinkling bell of an ice-cream truck. "I know that too."

-xx- Nika-chan

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Re: Masterpiece anat_astarte November 18 2008, 06:09:23 UTC
Loved all of these too. Truly a great, great fic!

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