[fic] The Great Pantomime

[ronsard]

I was trying to figure out what Shisui could have been doing for Madara in The Burning of Paper Instead of Children. Anyway, this story isn’t it, but it was way more fun to write. It should either make you laugh or creep you out - if it does both, I'd be very chuffed.

Title: The Great Pantomime
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Madara/Shisui
Summary: A

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[ronsard]

This was probably not what you needed to read after an exhausting day D: This is probably not something anyone needs to read ever.

A lot of the inner!Madara monologue in this fic is carryover from my first Madara-centric fic, in which he fucked over a whole bunch of people. Amazingly, I think somehow he's even more twisted here. More... concentrated. Ew.

Shisui was originally going to be even YOUNGER. I aged him up, because even I couldn't write about the seduction of a twelve-year-old or something. So skeevy .__. There is an entire tradition in Naruto, though, where young boys are picked up by older men to be used as tools (Haku, Kimamaro - both of whom should have made cameos in this fic, actually), which goes to show that if you're found young enough, it doesn't really matter if your beloved is a good person or not. According to Kishimoto anyway. Dude, that is pretty fucked up.

Well, it made... me laugh? I was cracking up while writing most of the first half, but admittedly when I got to the last sections I became kind of depressed. Bipolar fic is bipolar.

[loika]

This is probably not something anyone needs to read ever.
I disagree, I totally needed to read it!

There is an entire tradition in Naruto, though, where young boys are picked up by older men to be used as tools
Oh yes, definitely. Or you know, babies are used as containers for horrific beasts. WHAT A BRILLIANT IDEA.

I think the way you draw forth your readers' emotions is amazing. :)