FIC: Crushed

[stuckinsea]

Title: Crushed 
Author: Hannah aka

Comments

[aylaranzz]

Awwwww. Poor Draco. That makes me sad. *snuggles OTP*

[stuckinsea]

I blame kennahijja for getting me hooked onto Ron/Lucius. So, sorry, but you know I proudly wave my Ron/Draco flag all the time, so Ron deserves some fun...besides Lucius can teach him tons of new tricks...lol.

[nattybear]

Awww man! That's so sad.

[stuckinsea]

Sorry. But, in this world, Lucius always gets what he wants...even if it means pushing aside Draco to get it, I mean him. ;p

[nattybear]

Argh, stupid LJ posted before I finished my comment. I was going to say that Lucius is just such a pimp that it's almost okay. ;)

[stuckinsea]

Oh, yes...he's a beauty isn't he? Ah, Lucius how I love you so.

[kennahijja]

*giggles*
Ah, life - full of precluded possibilities ;). Loved your PoV - so very Draco :). And the inter-Malfoy rivalry was fun. Second sentence might be a tad ambiguous (it's Voldie who killed Narcissan, not Lucius, right?).

I adored Ron batted away Draco’s hand.”

Lovely drabble!

[stuckinsea]

Thank you for the kind comments. And thanks so much for being honest as well and letting me know about certain parts.

it's Voldie who killed Narcissa, not Lucius, right

Yes it was *facepalm* what can I say I'm an idiot...lol. I had a long version all thought up and drafted, but of course for the drabble community I had to widdle it down, it barely made sense at a hundred words, so I cheated and added more. But, it's practice for the challenge I've got here, which is to say the least...challenge is so the right word.

Thank you again Hijja, I'm glad you liked it. Your opinion means so much, especially when it comes to writing these two.

[kennahijja]

Not an idiot - I remember trying to cut stuff into drabble size, and it's so bloody much work and can end up as a confusing mess, but this is shiny, both characterisation and dialogue!

[awry]

Poor Draco. :( I blame you for my new found fascination with Ron/Lucius.