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seaislewitch in romancingwizard

maze

Aug 16, 2006 01:03

Prompt: maze
Author: seaislewitch
Wizard: Draco Malfoy
Rating: PG ( Read more... )

Comments 10

redvelvetcanopy August 16 2006, 11:01:48 UTC

That's so well-written, it feels like it must be longer than a drabble should be. Wonderful, desperate description of his situation. If anything could save him, it would be her.

seaislewitch August 16 2006, 16:30:13 UTC

Thanks, RVC, I appreciate your comment.

laudomia August 17 2006, 05:49:45 UTC

I agree. There's a fine sense of urgency that fits Draco and the scene perfectly. Bravo.

seaislewitch August 19 2006, 03:53:02 UTC

Thank you, Laudomia. I'm very happy you liked Draco's desperate sprint to safety.

velvetcandy August 16 2006, 14:54:44 UTC

Amazing. RVC said it perfectly above. It was just incredible your use of words here.

seaislewitch August 16 2006, 16:32:08 UTC

Thanks, VC, for your nice compliment. :)

I think he'd keep his promise to her.

veradee August 16 2006, 21:35:56 UTC

I like how you captured his emotions, his desperation.

seaislewitch August 16 2006, 22:42:39 UTC

Thank you, veradee. :)

vaughn7272000 August 20 2006, 04:50:55 UTC

This is one of the best I've seen; the emotion is so raw and real here.

seaislewitch August 20 2006, 06:24:45 UTC

Thanks, Vaughn, your words mean a lot to me.