Between Love and Trust

Jul 28, 2008 23:34



Challenge Twenty: The Wizards of Summer - Drabbles
Title: Between Love and Trust
Author: irespressogirl
Wizard/Witch: Draco Malfoy/Pansy Parkinson
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Prompt: 9 - ire
Theme: Difficult Decisions

Pansy angrily searched for answers in her fiancé's grey gaze. Her arrant fury might've sparked the summer gale raging out-of-doors ( Read more... )

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gelsey July 29 2008, 04:00:08 UTC
Oh no! He should have thought more carefully before he made such a choice! The last line just adds so much punch to the entire thing.

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irespressogirl July 29 2008, 05:41:55 UTC
Thanks! I'm sure he had reasons for making the decision he did, but I don't think Draco expected it to turn out as it did -- he probably didn't expect Pansy to find out, sadly.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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irespressogirl July 29 2008, 05:44:06 UTC
Thanks! Draco and Pansy are excellent characters, and although I know there are others who write them much better than I do, I hope to be able to do a bit of justice to them. I'm certainly glad you now like them! It does stink that they ended up apart here -- I don't think either one of them is happy with the outcome, sadly.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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pokeystar July 29 2008, 04:32:42 UTC

Very well done.

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irespressogirl July 29 2008, 05:44:13 UTC
Thanks!

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lunafish July 29 2008, 05:46:35 UTC
I love all the emotion in this one, and you've framed it beautifully within the literal (emotion-induced) storm outside!

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irespressogirl July 29 2008, 23:17:56 UTC
Thank you! The emotion of the characters and the storm were the most important things to me in writing the drabble, so I'm glad you enjoyed them.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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seaislewitch July 29 2008, 13:27:46 UTC
Noooooooooooo! *sobs*

This can't be the END!

Well done drabble.

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irespressogirl July 29 2008, 23:19:10 UTC
*pats head* I'm sorry. :( Once the idea got into my head, I couldn't see this drabble done any other way. Next challenge I'll write a happy Pansy/Draco fic.

Thanks!

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seaislewitch July 29 2008, 23:35:28 UTC
I'm bookmarking this page... :)

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