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Hot Times

Jun 02, 2008 16:44

Challenge Nineteen: Bring Out Your Dead!
Title: Hot Times
Author: drcjsnider
Wizard/Witch: Fred/Hermione
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Genre: Romance/Drama
Word count: Exactly 750
Prompt: 22. Starting Over
Summary: Some unintended consequences of Hermione helping out at the Weasley’s Wizarding Wheezes.

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Comments 39

sshg316 June 2 2008, 22:17:18 UTC

Oh, you had me all teary at one point, and then smiling by the end. Beautifully done! It's so great to see Fred getting some love. *loves Fred*

They were both trying so hard -- it was just so like them. Oh, I just love it even more the longer I think about it!

drcjsnider June 2 2008, 23:49:51 UTC

Oh glad you liked it... I do think these two could work together quite well, once both knew what the other wanted :)

ceirdwenfc June 2 2008, 22:18:02 UTC

I loved this. The more Fred I read (and write) the more I love that character. And this line: "Instead, however, she’d burned down his store.", I thought that was a great sense of her humor. Nicely done.

drcjsnider June 2 2008, 23:50:59 UTC

Heh... yea, I wasn't sure how that line would come out, but I'm glad I included it. Fred is just a doll... I do love him so much

gelsey June 2 2008, 22:23:26 UTC

He's so in love, he might not even notice. <-- the greatest line ever! I loved it. Funny and the ending was just great. Good job.

drcjsnider June 2 2008, 23:52:06 UTC

Oh thanks! I do think when you are in love... it does tend to make all the rest of your life just a little bit easier

seaislewitch June 2 2008, 22:24:09 UTC

Sometimes it takes a tragedy to make people see what's in front of them.

You did a great job with describing their animosity, as well as the workings of the shop. (I do hope they are able to get the shop back up and running.)

Well written!

PS I liked the title. *g*

drcjsnider June 2 2008, 23:54:53 UTC

Oh thanks! I figured if they were both trying to prove something it MIGHT get a bit uncomfortable :)

missblane June 2 2008, 22:54:12 UTC

I'm glad everything worked out for them. Good job on slipping the magical device in there. I'm sorry everything but the Pygmy Puffs was destroyed, though. All that hard work!

Good job!

drcjsnider June 2 2008, 23:55:21 UTC

I figured Hermione would save the magical creatures... rather than the headless hats or anything similar!