All for Love

Mar 30, 2008 18:15



Challenge Eighteen: March Madness Redux
Title: All for Love
Author: lewlinx
Wizard/Witch: Gregory Goyle/Laura Madley
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Genre: Romance/Whimsy
Word count: Exactly 500
Prompt: 25. a walk around the lake
Summary: There’s more to Gregory Goyle than we’ve ever been shown.

All for Love )

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seaislewitch March 30 2008, 16:26:19 UTC
The softer side of Gregory Goyle... This just proves my theory, the love and hexing of a good witch can shape-up even the roughest of characters. *g*

I loved the three times around the lake enchantment!

Well done, Lew!

(PS: I just realised this was one of my pairings from P&P.)

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lewlinx March 30 2008, 17:55:10 UTC
I am of your opinion, only a strong witch can shape-up one of these wizards!

I borrowed the three times around the lake from my Uni days, there's this lake that separates two of the campuses and tradition says that if any couple, but especially a Douglass Girl and Cook Guy (Douglass and Cook being the campuses) walk three times around the lake their love lasts forever. Now I think of it, there were so many of these silly things around Rutgers..heh

I think I should have included that on my author's notes...

Glad you enejoyed it!

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somigliana March 30 2008, 16:34:24 UTC
Aw, Greg. I love how he's changed over the years with the love of a good witch :)

I loved the concept of the lake and the charm!

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lewlinx March 30 2008, 17:57:39 UTC
Yes, I think that's exactly what Gregory needed, a strong witch that would show him what he really needed to do.

As for the lake concept, I borrowed the three times around the lake from my Uni days, there's this lake that separates two of the campuses and tradition says that if any couple, but especially a Douglass Girl and Cook Guy (Douglass and Cook being the campuses) walk three times around the lake their love lasts forever.

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moonblossom55 March 30 2008, 17:42:27 UTC
The 3 times around the lake charm was enchanting. And I very much liked the double romance--Laura and Goyle's and in tandem, Sofia and her young man.

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lewlinx March 30 2008, 18:01:27 UTC
Thanks, moon! :D

I had fun seeing how this played out, I had to change it a few times around, but I am glad the double romance made it come together nicely :)

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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gelsey March 30 2008, 17:59:00 UTC
Awww, how sweet! I like how you looked at it from the future. He's a good daddy! So wonderful. I really like this look at him.

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lewlinx March 30 2008, 18:04:01 UTC
Thanks, gelsey!

I had a good time writing this one, I figured Gregory would become a better wizard with time and of course the right kind of guidance ;)

Happy to know you enjoyed it!

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closetravenclaw March 30 2008, 20:06:08 UTC
I love the POV, the details, and Goyle giving his daughter romantic advice makes it a lovely, light-hearted read..

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lewlinx March 30 2008, 20:38:15 UTC
Thanks for such a nice commet, closetravenclaw! Im happy you've enjoyed it.

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