Always Running

Mar 19, 2008 16:27



Challenge Eighteen: March Madness Redux
Title: Always Running
Author: delayed_poet
Wizard/Witch: Roger Davies/Patricia Stimpson
Rating/Warnings: PG 13/R
Genre: Romance/Passion
Word count: Exactly 500
Prompt: #14 Spring Thunderstorm
Summary: She could only give him her body for so long before he also had her heart. Even though she knows he will leave, even ( Read more... )

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seaislewitch March 20 2008, 01:30:00 UTC
I'm a sucker for happy endings too. ;)

I like how you used the prompt to illustrate Tricia's tumultuous emotions.

Well done, delayed_poet!

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delayed_poet March 20 2008, 01:35:06 UTC
Thank you so much!

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gelsey March 20 2008, 02:56:33 UTC
Passionate and lovely. I'm so glad he came back. It makes things all happy and shiny, and that's just brilliant to me.

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delayed_poet March 20 2008, 05:44:59 UTC
Well this is a romance community and I just couldn't bear to leave Tricia all sad and heartbroken (like you did to Blaise last challenge *sad*). Thanks, lovely!

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redvelvetcanopy March 20 2008, 13:04:40 UTC
So happy and wonderful! A perfect springtime romance! I was worried, at first, that she had Obliviated that memory, but I'm so very glad to see it was just the opposite.

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delayed_poet March 20 2008, 16:41:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I was worried that it might seem like a type of Obliviation, so I made sure to elaborate on it. I'm so glad you liked it!

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cecelle March 26 2008, 16:44:19 UTC
Yay for a commitment-phobe finally seeing the light! This is so sweetly romantic - I loved it!

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delayed_poet March 27 2008, 02:47:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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moonblossom55 March 26 2008, 21:09:43 UTC
You evoked quite the thunderstorm in her. I really liked that spell--here she was wanting to hang on to what she thought would be her last memory, and then she finds out she'll have a chance to make new ones.

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delayed_poet March 27 2008, 02:48:50 UTC
Thank you so much for this comment. What you've said completely captures what I was hoping to do with this story!

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