Simple Things

[lunalovepotter]

Challenge Seventeen: Messages From The Heart
Title: Simple Things
Author: lunalovepotter
Wizard/Witch: James/Lily
Rating/Warnings: PG-13/R
Genre: Romance/Passion
Word count: Exactly 750
Prompt: #26: Flower Petals in a Letter.
Summary: James Potter is all flash & flair. But that isn't what gets Lily's attention.

Comments

[seaislewitch]

This is a lovely peak into Lily's mind during her courtship with James.

I like how you used the letter to show Lily's recognition of how James had matured.

I enjoyed this! Thanks for participating!

[lunalovepotter]

Thank you very much! :)

[gelsey]

How cute! I thought it was very sweet and very plausible. Good job.

[lunalovepotter]

Thank you! :)

*That's a great icon! Love dolphins. :)

[gelsey]

Thanks! The wonderful somigliana made it for me :D

[redvelvetcanopy]

I really love the insight into Lily's mind and your take on how James finally convinced her. This is passionate and romantic, all at once.

Excellent tale!

[lunalovepotter]

Thank you! :)

[lewlinx]

What a sweet drabble!

It's nice to see how Lily felt as she fell in love with James.

Very clever of James to shower her with rose petals :D

Glad to see you had fun with the challenge.

[lunalovepotter]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[ladywhitehart]

How sweet of her to keep them! It makes all the difference when men take the time to find out what a woman really likes.

[lunalovepotter]

Thank you very much! :)