Ashes of the Heart

Feb 14, 2008 15:11



Challenge Seventeen: Messages From The Heart
Title: Ashes of the Heart
Author: gelsey
Wizard/Witch: Blaise Zabini/Pansy Parkinson
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 Adults Only
Genre: Romance/Despair
Word count: Exactly 750
Prompt: 4. Ode to my lover…
Summary: Sometimes, no matter how happy something makes you, it just isn't meant to be. Loss and grief burn away ( Read more... )

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seaislewitch February 14 2008, 21:36:57 UTC
I'm stunned...and can't write. *takes deep breath*

This is breathtaking and gorgeous in every way.

You took me somewhere else with this. I'll be reading this again, Gelsey, many times.

*applause*

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gelsey February 14 2008, 23:21:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so very glad you liked it. I worked hard on it :) even stayed up late last night because I was afraid the muse would die if I went to bed without roughly finishing it.

Thank you again for your praise! You've made my day :D

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seaislewitch February 15 2008, 15:34:42 UTC
The story was well worth that late night push.

It's just wonderful!

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alittle2happy February 14 2008, 22:50:27 UTC
ah no poor blaise!!

wonderfully done, i loved the way pansy wakes up, i wish i was as cute when i wake up

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gelsey February 14 2008, 23:22:11 UTC
Thank you! Blaise is a special baby of mine and it hurt me to do this to him.

Lol. I think we all wish we could be that cute ;)

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lewlinx February 14 2008, 23:04:36 UTC
I was curious about this prompt and you've done such a wonderful job its stunning!

Its sexy, sweet...heartbraking.

He's a great wizard, Blaise. He knows when to do the right thing :)

Great job, Gelsey!

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gelsey February 14 2008, 23:23:25 UTC
Thank you! I have a special fondness for Blaise. I couldn't let him be mean in this.

I'm so glad you liked it.

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missblane February 15 2008, 00:06:32 UTC
Wow. It flows beautifully, and I love the poetry; you've spaced it perfectly. My heart breaks for Blaise. *tear*

Great work!

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gelsey February 15 2008, 00:14:37 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Poor Blaise :(

Thanks!

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seaislewitch February 15 2008, 15:32:09 UTC
And now Blaise can find true love with Daphne!

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veritybrown February 15 2008, 02:41:16 UTC
Very emotion-wrenching! Poor Blaise....

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gelsey February 15 2008, 15:28:58 UTC
Thank you! *pets the Blaise*

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