Campfire

[writermerrin]

Challenge Sixteen: Holiday Drabbles & Drawbles
Author: writermerrin
Wizard/Witch: Remus Lupin/Nymphadora Tonks
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Prompt: #13, Campfire

The campfire lent little warmth to Remus’ body, aching from the previous night’s transformation. For the millionth time, he cursed the Darkness, the fear, the inability to use his wand for warmth and

Comments

[seaislewitch]

Beautiful, writermerrin.

Fear. Relief. That brings so much emotion, so efficiently portrayed -- and in drabbles word choice is the key. :)

[writermerrin]

Thanks. In my original draft, that was a whole long sentence; I'm glad it worked this way.

[gelsey]

Very good job.

They do work together so well.

[writermerrin]

Thanks :) I've been wanting to write them for a long time, and this really lent itself to the pairing.

[valis2]

Oh, so sweet and heartwarming!

[writermerrin]

Thanks :)

[ginny_weasley31]

Awww. That's so sweet. I feel so terrible for poor, tortured Remus.

[writermerrin]

Thanks. I haven't been able to write them since the last book came out; I like them in this era better.

[robin777]

That was so sweet and you could really feel the emotions coming from Remus.

[writermerrin]

Remus got a raw deal in a lot of ways; I'm glad it came through.