Unbelievable

[gfeather]

Challenge Twelve: March Madness
Title: Unbelievable
Author: gfeather
Wizard/Witch: Seamus/Luna
Rating/Warnings: PG-13/R
Genre: Romance/Whimsy
Word count: 500
Prompt: sacked yesterday
Summary: Sometimes unbelievable things happen when you least
expect them.

Comments

[seaislewitch]

I adore this story. It's sweet, sexy and amusing.

Your characterisation of Luna was wonderful, and I enjoyed Seamus' reactions to her.

Thanks for participating, gfeather.

[gfeather]

So glad you liked it. I went back afterwards and scratched my head looking for spring, since it isn't very explicit and pubs aren't very springlike. Oops. But that rabid bunny wouldn't let me go. Seamus refused to leave the pub!

[veradee]

This is lovely. I like how you showed that Luna is actually very perceptive despite of being very quirky as well.

[gfeather]

Thanks. Luna is such fun to write and who better to so someone the illogic of drowning your sorrows?

[valady]

hehe That was adorable, you kept Luna well in character. Nicely done!

[gfeather]

I have loved Luna right from the first encounter with her. She's just so quirky and fun with some of the very best lines in the books.

Thanks for reading!

[somigliana]

I adore your Luna - wonderfully in character. She's dreamy and quirky, but really, she is quite sharp underneath it all.

[gfeather]

Thanks. I did a bit of reading before I tried to write her. Particularly good was Six Impossible Things Before Breakfast by delicfcd

I love her character and she was fun to write.

[salamon2]

You did an excellent job at capturing Luna's character, although she wasn't as airy sounding as I'm used to. I too love Luna, so I hear you there.

~Salamon2

[gfeather]

The tricky bit is that she is airy while being very astute and it's hard to strike the right balance. I love the idea of her telling someone they are being an idiot.

Thanks for reading.