Series:TPTB-Ch.15, Triggered (Marcus/River)

[romanceguru]

Title: Triggered (15/?) 
Series: The Powers That Be 
Author: Romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is the boss of me.
Rating: R for heaps of immorality.
Fandom: Firefly/Angel  Crossover
Characters/Pairing: Marcus/River, Simon, & OC. 
Warning: Possibly very dark and disturbing.
Timeline: Continued from immediately from “ No Rest for The Wicked.”
A/N: This, by far, was

Comments

[kittykat1979]

OMG.... that's all I'm capable of saying right now, that was SO amazing and the ending had me going for the tissues *sniffles* :)

[romanceguru]

See, that’s what I was wondering about, the whole emotional provocation thing. *is relived* I know I teared up during the initial write, but I’ve been over this chapter so many times now that I’m numb and was starting to doubt that it would have affect.

Long winded story short, yay. Thank you.

[tinadoll]

ohnothatbastarddidn't

I hope to bloody hell Marcus gets the shit kicked out of him for that.

Jesus! Unexpected!Simon death :(

[romanceguru]

*eg*

But he does evil so seamlessly!

Oh, Marcus is going to get retribution in one form or another…

Unexpected? Good. I was hoping it wasn’t going to be blaringly obvious. Thanks for the R&R!

[guinny_hamilton]

Dude.

I mean, dude. Dude.

Jesus, dude.

I am lost for words. Seriously. Words, I have them not.

It's so... and then the... *flails helplessly*

This was so good. So, so, so good.

Jesus, dude.

[romanceguru]

Jesus is the dude! And the man. You crack me up with your shock and awe. Found your words yet?

♥ U!

[bookaddict43]

Oh boy! Poor Simon and River. Simon unleashing River the weapon was awesome and so sad and what she became was terrible and sad. It was sad! :( Even Marcus' triumph, if that's what it is, was sad...

Which makes this great - but I have no notion where you might go next. Tell me???

[romanceguru]

Yes! You picked up on that. Bittersweetness all around, I’m afraid. It’s time for little River to grow up, to see the world universe for what it really is.

I won’t give anything away except that the next chapter starts with River chained up somewhere...

[mymatedave]

I've spent the hour reading this story and it is amazingly, terrifically fucked up. And I mean that in a good way, can barely wait to see what happens next.

[romanceguru]

Terrifically fucked up.

Ha! I love that as a promotional tagline for this story. Glad you’re enjoying it! Working on the next bit…