Love, Hate and Irony, Chapter 1

[romancednwrte]

Okay, I'm starting a new fanfic! Don't worry, Iron Vows is still going!
Genre: humor and romance
Characters: Tony and OC.
Summary: Pepper went and is assigned Tony an intern without telling him! Worst of all, she knows exactly how to handle Tony. What would you do if you spent a long summer with Tony Stark full of love, hate and irony?Tony/OC, sorry

Comments

[saichick]

Pepper is EVIL

[romancednwrte]

Oh, thanks ton for the concrit! I'm sad knowing this fanfiction prob wont be read very much, people only wanna read Pepper/Tony stuff, but I'm still gonna have fun with this!

[saichick]

Yah ... I hear you ...

I'm in the middle of an original novel that's got nothing to do with any other superheroes and can only get a few people to read and review. It's a big job and people just don't have the time ...

Constructive criticism is hard to come by...

But please keep writing whether or not you have an audience. It's something you do for yourself ... the pleasure of an audience makes it easier but is not necessary. Especially when developing a totally new original character.

Just be sure to avoid "Mary Jane" characters (slipping someone who is obviously -you- into your story). Your creations should be like children ... inheriting some of your good and bad qualities ... but a truly good character will also misbehave and do things you don't approve of because they have minds of their own. When you find yourself having conversations in your head between your different characters, you know you've reached that special place of truly being "a writer."

[romancednwrte]

OMG, ShellyStark and I already had a conversation about Mary Janes, and I will tell you what I told her. trust me, I'm not gonna try to make the audience like her. In fact her and Tony are about to bang heads A LOT, and they're not gonna like her.
Thanks for taking your time to review. Could you please leave me a link to the first chapter of your novel? I'd love to read it!