(Untitled)

May 06, 2013 20:18


Title: untitled
Rating: PG13 for language
Word Count: 1200-ish
Warnings: None. I think it's pretty safe.
Disclaimer: Yes, the characters are mine. All mine. I made them up 50 years before I was born (I'm magical that way). In fact, I demand royalties from Marvel. Pay me now or suffer the wrath of the lawyers I'm financing through the money in my ( Read more... )

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shenshen77 May 7 2013, 07:28:04 UTC
I love this fic :D I giggled the first time I read it, I giggled every time after :D

Your dialogues are awesome, I love the snark and banter and the genuine emotions you convey in them. I'm with alphaflyer, I wonder what will happen when Clint tries to explain this epiphany to Nat, because that would be awesome to read, I'm sure! But knowing your love for UST, we'll probably never find out... *pouts*

*hugs you and this fic*

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alphaflyer May 7 2013, 11:58:58 UTC
Yep -- sometimes it's just okay to let the mind boggle, without spelling it all out ... :-)

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shenshen77 May 7 2013, 12:04:26 UTC
Absolutely :D We all have a rather active imagination anyway, right???? ;)

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rollingplains May 8 2013, 02:47:01 UTC
You know, in my mind, this is a scenario where Nat's the one secretly in love and Clint's oblivious. Well, sort of, apparently his subconscious knows a thing or two...

I've read a lot of fics where the two of them are secretly in love with each other, and ones where Clint's in love and Nat's oblivious, but rarely (if ever) the other way around so I took (admittedly, a weak) shot at it...haha

It's kind of hard to write haha...like how does Nat pine, you know? and she is pretty hot, so how does Clint not notice?

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shenshen77 May 8 2013, 06:57:37 UTC
Hehehe, I like where your head's at here :) And yes, Nat is behaving like a jealous teeny here, I think it would be hard for Clint's subconscious not to pick up something ;)

As for Clint not noticing, well, I think he'd be too preoccupied talking himself down, you know? I think he wouldn't even dream of Nat wanting him in that capacity. Until the moment when his subconscious tells him to open his damn eyes as see what's in front of him :D

Very well done, sweetie!

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rollingplains May 8 2013, 02:40:55 UTC
YOU - a source of constant encouragement in my sea of self-doubt haha...(hugs you back, btw)

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shenshen77 May 8 2013, 06:53:35 UTC
*Blushes* I'm glad I can be there for the ride, cause it's such a fun ride :D

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