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Kill the Chorus

Feb 24, 2013 14:14

Title: Kill the Chorus.
Rating: NC-17.
Pairings: Kyuhyun/Sungmin.
Warnings: PWP, underage boys having sex(over the age of consent).
Word count: 6517 words.
Disclaimer: Super Junior own themselves, I merely came up with the idea.
Beta: Rina~.
A/N: This was originally a part of my nano, but seeing as I never will finish it, I decided to post this ( Read more... )

genre: au, rated: nc-17, group: super junior, genre: high school au, genre: boarding school au, pairing: kyuhyun/sungmin

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keobukbi February 25 2013, 05:34:46 UTC

Boring.

rokeby February 25 2013, 07:15:22 UTC

Aw, I'm so sad you feel that, but I understand where you're coming from. There isn't a lot happening in this, which is why I tagged it as PWP ^^'''' hopefully I'll write something you'd like someday. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

keobukbi February 25 2013, 20:03:54 UTC

Sorry if I hurt your feelings but smut is always the same thing, just a different place. I wonder if the people that seem to enjoy it have ever had any persomal sex experience?

I must confess that I only read part of your fiction. When I realized the story line was the same old thing I stopped.

I am sure you will write a wonderful fiction someday that doesn't require pages of smut.

Please keep up the good work. Thank you.

rokeby February 25 2013, 20:32:53 UTC

Ah, no you're just giving me your honest opinion and I respect that. People like different thing I guess? That's the great thing about us human beings. We're all different :D And I wrote this because I wanted to, which is what we should do. Write for ourselves. But yeah, thank you for your opinions ^w^

maeriil February 25 2013, 20:36:16 UTC

Personally, I find your comment extremely rude. Not only did you criticise one of her fanfictions, but every single fanfiction that she has ever written. On top of that, you made it sound like her readers are stupid as fuck, which also, is kind of rude. I don't see how you can say that they all are the exact same thing, she has written plenty of different scenarios and scenes, and the smut is not always the same. And besides, sex can't always be kinky toys and 99 different positions at once, sometimes it's simple. But yeah, you're allowed to have your own opinion and all that, so i'm sure your comment is appreciated by the author, but try to tone down the rudeness next time.

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