Battle of Britain -- Chapter 12

Apr 16, 2012 16:58

Title: Battle of Britain Chapter 12

Rating: R (language and sexual situations)

Author: morgan72uk and Rogoblue

Summary: Ruth Morrell heading to France strains relations between Adelle and Laurence but Madeline drives a deeper wedge between them.

Chapter 12 )

rating: r, fic, chara: adelle dewitt, chara: laurence dominic, dewitt_dominic

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yazizzle33 April 17 2012, 05:22:37 UTC
“You know you can admit that you've lost something.” Judith spoke so gently Adelle had to stamp down the impulse to respond savagely that the other woman had no idea the enormity of what she had lost.

This is about when I lost it and the tears fell.

“Nothing of great importance,” she said, cadence measured, pitch and volume controlled, “and certainly nothing I can't live without.” She lied and Judith's stricken expression told her just how well. “Could you go back to work now, please; we have a great deal to do.” Such a dismissal, even Judith couldn't ignore.

This is when I let out a strangled cry and couldn't see because of the tears.

You guys just completely messed me up with this. Guh. I can't even. I don't know what's going to happen now.

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rogoblue April 17 2012, 13:05:47 UTC
I'm sorry to have made you cry but I'm kind of glad you did. This was an emotional scene and I always hope for an emotional reaction to scenes like this.

Well, as to what happens now ... it was supposed to be kind of an epilogue. I guess you could call it the little epilogue that grew and grew and grew.

Will most more soon.

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morgan72uk April 17 2012, 19:13:50 UTC
As to what's next - I'm pretty sure it's the attic and the end of the world... Or something like that.

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yazizzle33 April 17 2012, 20:35:34 UTC
I can't believe that was supposed to be the epilogue. That ending would've killed me.

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rogoblue April 17 2012, 21:02:35 UTC
I meant what comes after was supposed to be a mere epilogue. Didn't exactly turn out that way.:)

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yazizzle33 April 18 2012, 03:02:20 UTC
Ah ok. I so misunderstood there. LOL.

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