Just the Two of Us

[rogoblue]

Title: Just the Two of Us
Rating: R
Author: Rogoblue
Summary: Hanna and Jared are out of town. Peter is lonely and decides that Damien is just the person to pass the time with.
Spoilers: Minor throughout season 1, in particular 1.03 and 1.08.
Words:
Disclaimers: The toys are not mine but the idea is.
Dedication: To Missy who read it and

Comments

[rogoblue]

I outsmarted LJ this time. I copied my response first so LJ could not eat it. Hah!

I'm glad you gave this a try. I tried to put something for everyone in it and couldn't resist the dead fish joke (and it had to be F saying it, even if it was B saying F would say it).

I remember one critic saying that Damien Karp is the most aptly named character since Snidely Whiplash--which I though was a bit much.

Peter decided what he wanted and was not going to be denied (even if it was just ordering pizza and watching tv). And he uses the word beautiful because he can get away with it.

I'm not sure why I hesitate. It's probably only because I don't write it very often that I can't decide whether it's any good or not. I'll just have to get over it.

I agree that I could've left D/H out of this. In fact, I kind of have an idea for a slashy story where there is no Damien/Hanna component. Hmmmmmmm.

I think Damien is just more reserved in general and would admit to missing Hanna if she asked but probably wouldn't offer it.

I'm not a deep dish pizza person either and I think Damien was trying to meet Bash's not good for you criteria.

It's always an interesting choice where to end a story. Glad you liked mine.

Thanks, as always, for reading and commenting.