3/? of "Quicksilver"

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Title: Quicksilver.

crossover of Numb3rs and Cal's Immortals.
Dedicated to & written at the request of: Mustangcandi.
crossposted to my lj and to SaveColbyAuthor: Keenir

Comments

[mustangcandi]

haha. There were so many lines I loved here.

First, I loved that Colby translated for Callie to David. Obviously he knows her better than anyone. *sighs* I also loved the conversation with Nikki and Liz about what was going through Colby's head right now and "nothing repeatable." haha. Indeed. They apparently know HIM better than anyone.

Loved the part about visualizing the deck. Enjoyed Val and Amita's interaction.

Considering how many characters there are, this is just a lot of fun to read. I hope you're having as much fun writing it. :)

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*breathes a sigh of relief* I was very worried that I was making Callie too cold and harsh.

>and "nothing repeatable." haha. Indeed. They apparently know HIM better than anyone.
:D

there needs to be more fic with Val and Amita both in it.

I'm enjoying myself a good bit.

thank you.

[mustangcandi]

Well, Callie was a little colder and harsher in this fic... but Callie IS colder and harsher when she's on the job. So, she's got her game face on. I don't think she was out of character here. She was still pleasant and I'm sure she was thankful Colby was there. :)

I'm glad you're enjoying yourself. I can't wait to see more of this and how it all turns out. Maybe Cal's Immortals will have to work with the FBI more often. LOL.

I see your icon, and I raise you this one

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>Well, Callie was a little colder and harsher in this fic... but Callie IS colder and harsher when she's on the job. So, she's got her game face on. I don't think she was out of character here.
thank you for the reassurance.

(though its why I was hoping you would have written the first Cal's Immortals fic - to provide a yardstick)

> She was still pleasant and I'm sure she was thankful Colby was there. :)
Colby was probably feeling a little awkward. particularly with all the comments about his double-agent days.

>I'm glad you're enjoying yourself. I can't wait to see more of this and how it all turns out. Maybe Cal's Immortals will have to work with the FBI more often. LOL.
maybe.

Re: I see your icon, and I raise you this one

[mustangcandi]

though its why I was hoping you would have written the first Cal's Immortals fic - to provide a yardstick

I did consider it, but honestly, I didn't have a better grasp on all the other characters you created. I think you're doing just fine. I need to write more "Callie on the case" fic. :)

Colby was probably feeling a little awkward. particularly with all the comments about his double-agent days.

Awww. Poor thing. You're totally right about that. *pets his hair*

Re: I see your icon, and I raise you this one

[rodlox]

>I did consider it, but honestly, I didn't have a better grasp on all the other characters you created.
that's part of why its an ensemble cast - you can bring in any characters you want.

(imagine bringing in Liz, Nikki, or Otto for an ep in s1 Numb3rs)

> I think you're doing just fine. I need to write more "Callie on the case" fic.
several quotes come to mind:
"please and thank you"
"why yes, yes you should"
"that would be great"
"FANTASTIC!"

Re: I see your icon, and I raise you this one

[mustangcandi]

imagine bringing in Liz, Nikki, or Otto for an ep in s1 Numb3rs

OOOOH. I like imagining this very much. :)

I need to write more "Callie on the case" fic

That's part of what I was hoping to accomplish with the Comic Book series. :) I've been trying to write more fic that actually is FBI related and less schmoop. haha.

*goes to read part 4 (of 6?? WHEE!!)