You've Become What I Hate, Sold Yourself For A Bit Of Fame: Chapter Nineteen

Aug 13, 2012 19:57

Summary: Alex has just moved for the last of many times to Dulaney High school. He has decided that this is the year and school that he will try and become "popular" but if that happened would it be a bad thing? And will finding a new friend, that may think of him as more, also affect it?....
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone, sadly. Title goes to Bite ( Read more... )

josh franceschi, all time low, jack barakat/alex gaskarth

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mcrway August 14 2012, 21:59:57 UTC
The ending of this chapter OH MY GOSH yes! :D I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Kellin sure is still interesting but he's such a motherfucker oh god I just want Alex to break up with him. Yes they have been kinda cute together but Alex is supposed to be happily together with Jacky, not unhappily together with Kellin.
On the other hand, yes I do love drama and Kellin has brought it a lot into this story. :D

I feel bad for Alex and Jack. They both clearly like each other but they haven't even been friends for a while. Hopefully we get some cute Jalex soon! :3
Oh and this new character Matt is cool and I'm super happy for Josh, he's together with Hayley AWW! :)

I still do think you're a really great writer and this fic is really good, I'm really looking forward to your next update!

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roctodwho August 15 2012, 05:16:21 UTC
Haha Yes, I like the end of this chapter as well(:

Yeah, Kellin is definitely a motherfucker, but he needs to be as it is a vital point in the plot. And Alex isn't really unhappy with Kellin, he's just not exactly happy with him either.

I know, I feel bad for them too and Im the one writing it! And I really need to start putting little Jalex moments in, even if they aren't too exciting because Ive been really bad with that so far.

I like Matt(: And I know, I felt like Josh needed a girlfriend because I love him so much(:

Thank you so much! Im probably going to update on Thursday(: And thanks for your long comments as well, I like knowing what people think and your comments make me smile(:

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mcrway August 15 2012, 14:40:17 UTC
Oh, well I guess I wouldn't be totally unhappy in Alex's situation either because you know, bad boys are kinda hot (uh did I just admit that). But I just really want Alex to be with Jack 'cause they would be (and WILL be haha) cute!

Haha it's totally understandable, you usually kinda fall in love with your own characters and feel bad for them and stuff. :D

No, you're not bad with that! I mean, your one shot had Jalex moments and those were adorable. Yes, put some Jalex moments in, that would be awesome!

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THURSDAY. Oh my, aww you're sweet. :)

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roctodwho August 15 2012, 18:37:30 UTC
Hahaha yeah, I agree, bad boys definitely have their moments! But Jalex wins over all so don't worry about that!

It happens to me all the time! Like, I have to write something about a character because it is part of the plot but I feel bad because I don't want to hurt them or make them a dick!

And aww, thank you(: All I can say is next chapter(;

Thank you! Im sure loads of people will be happy on Thursday. (One of the good things about being the author is I get to know what happens beforehand! haha)

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mcrway August 15 2012, 20:08:48 UTC
I know the feeling! I'm writing a fic just for my friend at the moment and I don't want to write drama and make my characters unhappy, it's horrible. ):

Oh my god I'm so excited! Luckily Thursday is almost here. :D

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