Beginning

[lil_rebbitzen]

64. Beginning

Okay, this is my first post here, so be a little kind, please.

As I am using these prompts to help me flesh out a fanfic I am writing, They may be a little long. Just to warn you.

I figured starting with the Beginning prompt would be helpful, and fun. My continuity will almost always be the show, but I’ll be throwing in tidbits from the

Comments

[blackjackrocket]

Hmm. I'm having a hard time grasping exactly WHY these girls suddenly hate her.

[lil_rebbitzen]

Fixed it with an allusion at the end. I'll probably give the whole thing later on. :) Karen's twerked at her for it, and the other girls are just being little Karen clones. :P

Seren's a bit clumsy. She'll (hopefully) grow out of it.

[willy_wiluhps]

Hi! Welcome to the community!

This story reminded me of künstlerromane like Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man, showing the psychological development of children and young people, which I always think is so interesting! This one just goes to to show that even a concept like hatred is simple to little kids. Some people experience elementary school drama that can get very vicious, because often kids just don't understand all the consequences of their actions and cruelty. Nasty little buggers--so glad I never was one ;)

Also, just wondering, will you be posting the parts of your story in order? Or will these be more like side-stories, instead of actual chapters of your story?

I hope you have fun here! Enjoy your stay~

[lil_rebbitzen]

Thanks for the review. Before I joined, I read your Silver and Giovanni fics. I love them to death. I do agree with Giovanni being a bit more involved with his child (children, in my anime fic's case)'s than people give him credit for. Also, yes, the guy is Italian.

I actually was going for some of the psychological stuff with them growing up as I write the stories, since I'm trying to make it fairly realistic.

And yes, kids can be mean little buggers. :) Even if she accidentally embarassed the girl, she still apologized....

Some of the stuff will be in order, the next one being the Illness prompt, also explaining why one of the girls said she was really sickly for most of her childhood.

[nekusagi]

Awwwwwwww.

I think the Card story is anime canon too, and I LOVE fic about Little Giovanni. I'd love to see more where this came.

[lil_rebbitzen]

The next post will be more Lil' Vanni, don't worry :) It'll have Persian, too :P

[lil_rebbitzen]

Okay, the next ones I post will be Illness, Partner, Future, Birthday, and another that I have no idea what the prompt is :P Not necesarilly in order, but Illness will probably be next. Will probably do Heat and Night too at some point when I'm feeling...excited :)