Smiles chapter 21

[rock_gaara]

Title: SMILES

Disclaimer: Naruto and its characters are copyright of Masashi Kishimoto-sensei.

Pairings: Lee/Gaara, Shikamaru/???, Naruto/???

Rating: PG to NC17

Summary: After loosing Shukaku and the immense power it represented for Gaara, the said Kazekage started to train to compensate that loose. He just has one hanging subject: Taijutsu

Comments

Re: noo cliffhanger!!

[mangagirl1]

Please don't judge your own writing that way. I bet a lot of people want to comment on it and plan to later. I do that myself most of the time. I will even wait months before returning to comment on a story that I felt strongly about. I that this story was suspenseful, and exciting. You kept your readers on the edge of their seats with this division between Naruto, Gaara, and Lee. I thought the very idea of a love conflict amongst the three was brilliant.

Don't give up on this story. Be courageous and complete it and give people time to read and write on it. I bet this story has more fans than you think it does. And things get busy and crowded in live journal. It might be that many people have not even found the story in all the other things there are to read and comment on in livejournal. I find this site to be extremely fun, but exhausting.

Just don't give up. Keep plugging away at it. You are doing a great job. If I really thought your story sucked I would not devote my time to responding to your comment at all. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

Re: noo cliffhanger!!

[rock_gaara]

Very kind of you to comment back *blushes*. I wasn't going to give up on this story since it's the only one I have courage enough to writte it down and in English, no less. The truth is that, comments make a great difference. This won't sound modest at all but... in Y!Gallery I'm a bit more 'famous' and at least there, if I don't get comments, I still get to know how many people read it. The truth is that I post the chapters here once I've finished writting them, but in Y!Gallery I have the revised and corrected version (I recommend it to you) but the submission of chapters is taking longer since I wasn't very lucky with my beta readers... ^_^U

Thanks a lot for your comment, it really ment a lot to me.

My Y!Gallery account: http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/rockgaara/