In Our Wheels And Our Hearts

Mar 05, 2012 23:51

Title: In Our Wheels And Our Hearts
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Finn, Kurt
Words: ~2,200
Summary: They were halfway through their second lap around Rainbow Road when Finn finally just said it. Kurt and Finn have a mutually sort-of-embarrassing conversation, all while playing a video game. Takes place after The First Time.

Author's Note: I actually ( Read more... )

fic, the first time, finn, kurt

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shighola March 6 2012, 15:52:11 UTC
Love. This.
I can't get enough Hudmel brotherly bonding.

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robotsfighting March 7 2012, 22:13:28 UTC
Nor can I! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading.

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storywriter84 March 6 2012, 16:13:24 UTC
Finn so deserved that at the end. Great job! I don't think we get enough Finn-Kurt brotherly moments.

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robotsfighting March 7 2012, 22:13:52 UTC
That's what fic is for. Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

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flaming_muse March 8 2012, 00:58:29 UTC
I love this fic. I love all of the things it says about each of the boys individually (as picked up but not necessarily understood by Finn) as well as their brotherly relationship. I like the comfort/discomfort in the conversation, the moment where Kurt makes sure that Finn isn't embarrassed of Rachel, and the end, oh, Kurt's clever, clever end!

(Did you post this on the hudmels community? People should be reading it!)

<3

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robotsfighting March 8 2012, 16:18:40 UTC
(I did! This fic had a shockingly good run on Tumblr, so I'm not surprised that it isn't getting much play on LJ! It's already been well-read.)

I'm so glad you like it! ♥ Thank you very much. I love writing about their relationship from Finn's point of view. And Finn is just pleasant to write anyway.

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stoney321 March 8 2012, 19:11:27 UTC
Oh, this is SO WONDERFUL. I love the look at Finn's thoughts, how he worries and is unsure of what things mean (and when it's all going to fall apart.) It's like a beautiful description of him standing there in his shrug, hands in his pockets and twisted-half smile, waiting to be told he's wrong (but he isn't.)

The growing relationship between the brothers is just awesome.

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robotsfighting March 9 2012, 00:57:04 UTC
Agh, Finn! I love that idea, him standing there in his shrug, hands in his pockets and twisted half-smile, waiting to be told he's wrong. That's why I love Finn so much! That right there! ♥ That's such a wonderful way to put it. It makes me want to write more of him, just to continue that theme.

I'm so glad you liked this fic! Thank you very much.

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stoney321 March 9 2012, 01:07:49 UTC
I would be happy to encourage you to write all the Finn you'd like, should you find you need that.

I'm an excellent cheerleader. ;)

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robotsfighting March 9 2012, 00:57:36 UTC
Hah! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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