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Nov 22, 2008 23:55

 The twenty-second prompt is: Five recesses, four calls to Father, three lunch tickets, two brand new pencils, and a desk for all of my books.      Oddly, this has no real dialogue, but I love it nonetheless.

Christmas? But it isn't even Thanksgiving! )

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antistar_e November 23 2008, 07:07:24 UTC
I think perhaps this is my favorite of everything you've written for NaNoWriMo so far. I especially loved the image of the narrator having to take really big steps to step into her lover's footprints. Wheeee, heart-warming.

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robin_2370_hood November 23 2008, 07:22:52 UTC
I think it's my favorite, too. I also think it's the longest and most involved. I liked that image. This piece almost made *me* believe in Christmas magic, but I still don't.

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antistar_e November 23 2008, 07:25:58 UTC
Well, I'm not buying you a house, so you'll just have to stay disillusioned for awhile longer.

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robin_2370_hood November 23 2008, 07:43:25 UTC
but...why not? It's not like their expensive, or you'd have trouble buying and furnishing one by yourself.

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