Promise...II & III
Again, this time, it was a promise you never took care to fulfill…
I waited, for your return. All the time you just smiled at me, told me you promised to come back.
Ten years of waiting. Every day I wait till sunset, I cannot see your shadow still. Day by day, I waited. Letters at the table piled up, of which I did not open. For I knew, if I touch them, my wait would be over.
I dare not move those letters, gathering dust on the table…
Even until this very day, until the end of time…Your promise was not kept.
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And this is actually how much we should write for our short writing task.... A sweet 103 words....XDDD
Then, this one is a happier one... A good end, I guess.....
Promise III By arumo
You promised to come back to me. That you'll come back safe and sound, in my arms. Your smile as you left wrecked my heart. With a steady pace, you marched out of the door.
I thought to myself, I had to remember every bit of you closely, as it would likely be the last I can ever see of you. Your smile, the way you moved about, the carefree way you talked. I had to remember them closely, for I was afraid of losing you. Even that very little bit of memory I keep of you means the world to me when you were gone.
Long years passed by, time flew. I though I had lost you. But now, you are standing at the door, only looking older, drained, your hair white , but the smile on your face , stayed the same…
And I knew, this time, the promise was kept.
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And that's for now..............XDD Yes, I know it's corny....XDDDDDDDD Oh Well........On with some other work I have to do....
Comments are appreciated~!
I waited, for your return. All the time you just smiled at me, told me you promised to come back.
Ten years of waiting. Every day I wait till sunset, I cannot see your shadow still. Day by day, I waited. Letters at the table piled up, of which I did not open. For I knew, if I touch them, my wait would be over.
I dare not move those letters, gathering dust on the table…
Even until this very day, until the end of time…Your promise was not kept.
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And this is actually how much we should write for our short writing task.... A sweet 103 words....XDDD
Then, this one is a happier one... A good end, I guess.....
Promise III By arumo
You promised to come back to me. That you'll come back safe and sound, in my arms. Your smile as you left wrecked my heart. With a steady pace, you marched out of the door.
I thought to myself, I had to remember every bit of you closely, as it would likely be the last I can ever see of you. Your smile, the way you moved about, the carefree way you talked. I had to remember them closely, for I was afraid of losing you. Even that very little bit of memory I keep of you means the world to me when you were gone.
Long years passed by, time flew. I though I had lost you. But now, you are standing at the door, only looking older, drained, your hair white , but the smile on your face , stayed the same…
And I knew, this time, the promise was kept.
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And that's for now..............XDD Yes, I know it's corny....XDDDDDDDD Oh Well........On with some other work I have to do....
Comments are appreciated~!