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[TW fic] Spa Day (Jack/Ianto, NC-17)

Jun 11, 2010 12:41

Title: Spa Day
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto, Jack/Ianto/OC
Rating: NC-17
Stuff you should know: Written for kink_bingo. Prompt: shaving/depilation.
Beta: The entire damn Internet. Your lesson for today: never, ever, try to edit fic on a Blackberry. Thank you all.

( 'Ianto, a moment,' Jack says as the rest of the team files out. )

torchwood fic

Comments 109

amand_r June 11 2010, 16:44:12 UTC

YOWSA.

rm June 11 2010, 16:49:12 UTC

Was that "hot!" or "ouch!"?

amand_r June 11 2010, 17:49:01 UTC

A little of both! Sympathy wincing and yet also hotness!

rm June 11 2010, 18:56:00 UTC

I hear ya. I have had an awful lot of hair ripped out of me, and it's never been that interesting.

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kayleigh_jane June 11 2010, 16:53:50 UTC

Oh, my. Your subby but not so subby Ianto is way hot.

(two typos: “He new at this,” Jack adds / He has to cox the other man.)

rm June 11 2010, 16:54:57 UTC

Thank you and thank you! Got 'em fixed.

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rm June 11 2010, 18:04:35 UTC

Thank you!

tree00faery June 11 2010, 16:59:21 UTC

Couple of typos (sorry, the beta eyes never leave. feel free to screen this if you want.) "The whole matter awkward" should be "The whole matter /is/". Also "holds his cheek" should probably be "holds his cheeks".

Otherwise, this was LOVELY. Totally not my kink at all, but I absolutely adored the dynamic between Jack and Ianto here. I have a hard time buying Ianto as being completely willing and easily led to being submissive, so I really liked the way he's still sort of fighting it here, even though he knows it will be good for him. And the moment at the end was really sweet. :)

rm June 11 2010, 18:05:04 UTC

Thank you and thank you!

melebeth June 11 2010, 17:03:15 UTC

Hot and funny and very, very real. Great work.

rm June 11 2010, 18:05:23 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you were amused. It kept cracking me up when I was writing it.