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[TW fic] Training (Jack/Ianto, NC-17)

Jun 06, 2010 11:45

Title: Training
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC-17
Stuff you should know: Written for kink_bingo. Prompt: obedience. Also contains off-label use of sleeping pills, bondage, orgasm denial and gags. Oh god, this is why people use pseudonyms for their fic, isn't it? Hi, Internet!

( 'You know what your problem is, Ianto?' Jack asks, bouncing a pencil against the edge of his desk. It's annoying, and Ianto knows it's intended to be; for all he pretends otherwise, Jack's incredibly aware of the people around him. )

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Comments 43

liminalia June 6 2010, 16:16:50 UTC

Mmm, very nicely done.

rm June 6 2010, 17:39:17 UTC

Thank you!

anonymous June 6 2010, 16:47:05 UTC

Any chance of this getting continued? Please? Please please?

rm June 6 2010, 17:39:59 UTC

Thank you!

Like most things in my life, this suffers from the "hours in a day" problem, but it's not impossible that I'll come back to this either directly or in similar tone.

anonymous June 6 2010, 18:40:43 UTC

Yay!

xtricks June 6 2010, 16:47:48 UTC

These are great!

I love this kind of stuff and periodically I get stuck on writing my own -- the usual, am I clear? Are the dynamics balanced well? And it's nice to see other people's writing on intense power play.

Oh god, this is why people use pseudonyms for their fic, isn't it? Hi, Internet!

LOL

rm June 6 2010, 17:42:33 UTC

Yay, thank you.

Yeah, it's weird to balance, especially when it's Ianto who's so fucking stubborn and forceful and pretty good at recognizing when something's a bad plan and yet also loyal, likely to get in over his head, and prone just rolling over for Jack. I fully intend to write some of these where the dynamic is reversed, but I haven't quite hit those squares yet.

laufeyette June 6 2010, 18:05:33 UTC

rm June 6 2010, 18:07:23 UTC

Thank you!

Writing Jack's speech patterns is about the most fun thing for me EVER.

wynkat1313 June 6 2010, 18:07:14 UTC

fascinating....

oddly, I think this is my favorite set of lines:

“And no one's ever told you how.” It's not a question, except that it is.

Ianto nods.

“Bastards,” Jack says quietly.

hmm... says faaaar to much about my thought process i think. Still, it also says layers about Jack and what's behind all of this.

rm June 6 2010, 18:08:24 UTC

Thank you and thank you for catching that. There's always emotional plotty stuff lurking somewhere in my porn, and I wrote that little bit and was just so heartbroken for both them really.