Tension Rising (Part 2)

[rkowhore79]

Author: Rkowhore79
Title: Tension Rising (Part 2)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Centon
Summary: Randy lives a very secret and very dark life. Question is, can he trust John to be a part of it?
Warnings: Oh there will be blood...
Disclaimers: Randy isn't really as dark and depraved in real life as I make him out to be in this fic. Or at least I don't think

Comments

[rkowhore79]

O_O oh myyy! your compliments are always so flattering, they really are:)
i know this part was pretty short but i figured that that was a good stopping point. i'm def trying to raise the tension level in this so i'm glad that it's coming across as such and that the build up is working. that's what i'm going for but that's prob gonna mean short parts. oh well..i like this style of writing and i don't want to rush it by any means.

can you?? really?? it makes me so happy to hear that cuz i wasn't quite sure if that was coming across as intensely as i wanted it to in this part. i should have spent more time on randy selecting the blade and sitting there in the car waiting for his prey to show...i dunno. i might have rushed this part too much.

alrighty, well i'm just working on it now. i might stop in a bit, though, if i can find a feed for the ppv. def not buying it this time!

thank you again for your wonderful comments. they always make my day!!

[rkowhore79]

omggggggg breaking point!!! did you watch it yet??!!! i swear, it's like they read my fics or something!!! john?? handcuffed and crucified???? Scream For Me, much??!!!! omg,...the whole thing was just so gd hot, this fic is just gonna write itself!!!!

[rkowhore79]

i knowwwwwww!! that really couldn't have happened at a better time. everyone was like psycho fic!randal! lol eerieeee..