Comments | rj_anderson: I must be getting better at this after all

rj_anderson

I must be getting better at this after all

Mar 02, 2007 22:30

raleva31, otherwise known as Uber-Agent Rachel Vater, is looking at a bunch of query letters right now and saying what does and doesn't work for her. As some of you will recall, I tried this a few months ago with Miss Snark and didn't pass muster, so I worked hard on revising my hook before sending it in this time. Here's the result:

( Knife - The New Hook )

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Comments 4

olmue March 3 2007, 07:03:49 UTC

Yes, I saw yours. Yay! Have you queried her? And isn't an editor looking at this right now, too? You must be doing something right!

tybalt_quin March 3 2007, 12:59:03 UTC

Yay you! That's a great response.

:pointy dance of 2007 is gonna be your year:

olugbemisola March 3 2007, 20:15:29 UTC

very positive -- congratulations!

ravensnape March 4 2007, 16:19:04 UTC

Maybe since I'm somewhat familiar with the story or maybe just fantasy and faerie lore, but the size issue was no concern for me. Why wouldn't a faerie be able to adjust her size? I've read many such examples of faerie who can adjust as the need arises. I even think L. Frank Baum's The Legend Santa Clause has faeries who change size.