Diverted, Part 6

Apr 23, 2008 21:33

Rating: PG
Pairing: Akihiko/Minato
Spoilers: None

Akihiko plopped down on a bench in the no-man's-land of the fourth floor landing.  He was exceedingly thankful to find it deserted like usual, because having to follow Minato into the bathroom would have been the extra-weird icing on his already bizarre day.  He absently picked at a callus from ( Read more... )

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riyu_riya April 24 2008, 03:00:39 UTC
Aww, thanks for commenting then! I'm a total comment whore, nom nom nom. And I'm very glad the interaction rings true! Minato's very easy to write, but if I'm not careful...Akihiko wanders off in weird OOC directions.

I was actually depressed that chapter 5 didn't end in a cliffhanger, unlike all the others. I mean, that and doors...apparently they're my signatures! Heh.

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karmacitadel April 24 2008, 03:46:56 UTC
ASDFGH...!!

Oh my GOD you should've heard the garbled, strangled sound I made when Akihiko kissed Minato. Followed by a shrieking "YES!!" Thank god nobody else is home right now. XD

(I'll be basically moved in to my new place tomorrow. Perfect timing on this chapter, I feel like it's a housewarming present! XD )

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riyu_riya April 24 2008, 04:34:12 UTC
Hot damn, I got the housewarming timing right! Go me, go me... Terribly exciting on all counts (both story success and completed moving)!!

I'm also excited to announce that yesterday, in the midst of a very official-y meeting, I got bunnied for the first time. In the random one-off sort of way, since this relative epic doesn't count as a bunny. (And I actually needed to be thinking hard in that meeting, so extra surprising for the bunny to pounce from nowhere out of dull business stuffs!) For that story, I'm aiming to get to the kisses in only 1/3 of the words Diverted has required. :D

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magiccrackers April 24 2008, 22:44:01 UTC
ah this fic is absolute win <3

been reading since like chapter 3 or so, and i loves it, new chapters make my day! XD;

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riyu_riya April 26 2008, 00:29:52 UTC
Thanks! Glad to hear you keep coming back. 8)

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lady_mari_chan April 25 2008, 02:27:49 UTC
I so squee'd when they kissed. (Is that even a word?) I love this fic and am looking forward to more. Keep up the great writing.

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riyu_riya April 26 2008, 00:30:44 UTC
Squee is absolutely a valid verb. It's yaoi-tastic!

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raffi April 25 2008, 10:41:19 UTC
That instinct - part made me melt into fangirlish goo. *_*
It is simply awesome Riyu!~ I want more! I want more! *dances round the room*

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riyu_riya April 26 2008, 00:36:46 UTC
::grin:: Like I said earlier, writing Akihiko's POV has been more challenging, but that part? He totally wrote himself. ::pats him in thanks::

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raffi April 28 2008, 09:25:37 UTC
:3 Nyo~ Sooooo, when do you plan to post next chapter?

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riyu_riya April 28 2008, 22:09:15 UTC
Two things are going to delay it:
1. It's the last chapter, so proper justice must be done.
2. I've been distracted by a rabid plot bunny, that insists on being written first.

...Getting there though!

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