fic: love or death, grab an end, pull hard, and make a wish

[riyku]

Title: love or death, grab an end, pull hard, and make a wish
Genre: Jared/Jensen AU
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2300
Warnings: serial killer AU, with all the trappings thereof-violence, murder, gore.
Notes: written for salt_burn_porn, for cherie_morte's prompt rattling locks. Not only did she give me a great prompt, but also stepped up when I was having doubts and told me I

Comments

[sasha_dragon]

Great story, I do love a little dark Jensen and this more than satisfied that particular craving. You just knew the sheriff and his deputy were goners from the moment they walked in the room, they really shouldn't have taken him from Jared. Speaking of Jared I loved the relationship between them, very romantic in a twisted way.

Thank you for sharing this, it was dark, twisted and very hot.

[riyku]

Oh, thank you so very much. I'm delighted to see that there are quite a few of us who like Jensen when he's a little twisted and dark. It's lovely to know that you like this.

[oschun]

Ha! Great final line. I like the way this echoes the pilot and how you delay Jared’s entrance into the story and contextualize Jensen in the flashbacks.

[riyku]

wow! I didn't even think about the pilot honestly, but you're totally right! It's great to know that the jumpy chronology does the trick--I was worried that it was a bit hard to follow. Thanks so much for the note!

[quickreaver]

*flappy hands!*

Oh, DAMN, the most delicious Bonny and Clyde EVER. Two crazy, sick fucks, dangerously in love. And I find it really interesting that you let Jared--who knows Jensen could kill him on a whim--TOP. Very cool little bit of character development there, wrapped in a scorching bit of naughtiness! FanTABulous, lady!

*says a dedicated member of the psycho!boys fan club...*

Gawd, this was HOT.

[riyku]

ohhhhhh dangerously in love I adore that phrase! See, I have this big thing in my head as to why Jared has to top in this one (negotiation of trust, transference of power etc etc etc), and it's delightful that you picked up on those little breadcrumbs.

*does the psycho!boys fan club secret handshake* *compares secret decoder rings*

Thanks so much!

[badbastion]

Ahhhh, do I love sex and violence, and you do it so well. Really enjoyed this fic <3

[riyku]

sure is a winning combo, innit? thanks so much, bas!

[tabaqui]

AH, love it. Love the very staccato beat of it. The thoughts in Jensen's head and what he does are all bambambam. Gorgeous stuff!

[riyku]

Goodness, thank you! It's always a lot of fun to throw grammar out of the window and go all fragmented. So happy you liked this!