fic: know it while you have it

[riyku]

Title: know it while you have it
Genre: Jared/Jensen AU
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2300
Notes: written for the smpc. Title kinda ganked from Burkowski. Warnings for pseudo-cest (they're stepbrothers) and underage (Jared's around 15), established relationship, rimming, object insertion, and self-indulgent, lizard brain writing

Comments

[dolnmoon]

Holy freaking Hot Flash!! This was really, really, good.

So intense and pretty romantic for a 19 and 15yr olds relationship. I loved Jensen's teasing at the sink, his foot under the table, the way he called him brother of mine, kiddo and just kid.

The idea that Jensen was okay with Jared and another person.. Jared wanting only his brother.. only needing him and Jensen is perfectly fine with that.

You never fail to give me boys that I can fall in love with and feel emotional about.

KUDOS <3 <3 <3 <3

[riyku]

aw, mighty kind of you to say! it's interesting what you say about the romantic nature of this whole thing, made me look at it a little differently. i really wanted to write a relationship that they were settled into. sure, it's still dangerous and taboo, but it's also founded on the fact that they've known each other for years and there's this dichotomy of familiarity and strange.

very happy that this one did the trick. thanks so much!

[alycat]

Well unf.

I love how they both think of each other as brothers, even more so during the sex. It just makes it that extra bit of filthy hot..

[riyku]

thanks so much! and yeah, my incest kink is showing, isn't it? happy you liked this!

[paperbackwriter]

Oh Hun. I don't even know what to say. Just lovely. Love the longing and the anticipation and Jared sitting through dinner with that thing in his ass and oh god, Jensen pulling over on the way home to jerk off thinking about it and just the way they talk to each other...it's so good.

Thank you : ) ♥ xx

[riyku]

wow! thank you so much. your note on the dialogue has made me extremely relieved. i was afraid that the were too many hairpin turns in the way they talk to each other, but i guess that siblings can be like that, right? happy you liked this!

[paperbackwriter]

Oooo, no, it was perfect. I was trying to dissect it to see how you got that intimacy but at the same time a real sense of them being very much brothers...I gave up.
I figured you used magic and left it at that : )

I find your writing so inspirational, Hun. You're hands down one of my favourite writers, books or fic. I hope you don't mind me saying : ) ♥

[ephermeralk]

I wish I had something coherent to say. But nope.

I'm just going to drown in the epic hotness of their softy intimacy for the rest of the day...

[riyku]

you look pretty coherent from over here! so glad that you liked this one. thank you!

[cherie_morte]

*drags self along the floor* KC, just admit this was a calculated move to kill me so you can inherit my cake. Just admit it. Because there is no other good reason for you to go and post PSUEDOCEST that is also THIS HOT on a day where YOU KNOW MY J2 IS COMPROMISED AND I AM A STEP AWAY FROM DEATH.

[riyku]

*picks you up and dusts you off*

Okay. You caught me red handed. It's about the cake. It's always been about the cake and it's probably always gonna be about the cake.

YOUR J2 IS COMPROMISED AND MY J2 IS SO BUSY FLINGING ITSELF INTO THE SUN THAT I CAN HARDLY KEEP UP AND WE ARE BOTH IN TERRIBLE, TERRIBLE SHAPE HERE. We need help.

[cherie_morte]

I read it again last night and then it was wonderful again so I jumped into lava.