Comments | riyku: fic: Where the Truth is Found

riyku

fic: Where the Truth is Found

Nov 29, 2009 00:02

Title: Where the Truth is Found
Genre: J2 RPS
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~600
AN: Written for spn_30snapshots : table 09, prompt 01.

( Where the Truth is Found )

fic: j2, snapshots, rated: pg

Comments 8

desertport November 29 2009, 05:29:43 UTC

when he wouldn’t know these scars, a time when Jensen would get new ones, and Jared wouldn’t know how or why they came to be.

Aw. Love that moment of meloncholy in the middle of a normal afternoon. Just right.

tygers November 29 2009, 15:56:47 UTC

Sometimes thoughts like that just hit a person out of left field...Thanks so much Port, I'm glad you liked it!

cowboyangel November 29 2009, 05:57:06 UTC

This was a great little snippet. I love Jensen working with his hands and Jared being contemplative. A little melancholy but hopeful too if you look at it just right :)

tygers November 29 2009, 16:03:01 UTC

Yes! I'm sort of fixated on this idea that for all of Jared's over-the-top personality, there is a quiet and contemplative side to him that we don't get to see. I'm happy that showed through in the story. Thanks m'dear!

silentpoetry1 November 30 2009, 05:04:51 UTC

Oh, that was sad. I love how you took such a trivial thing on a regular afternoon and made it so tragic and beautiful. And that part about hands was gorgeous-- the nostalgia makes me so sad.

For a moment, Jared allowed an idea to creep up, and he wondered if there would ever come a time when he wouldn’t know these scars, a time when Jensen would get new ones, and Jared wouldn’t know how or why they came to be. That tells a whole story, honestly. And the fact Jensen needs to do things himself... lovely, seriously. ♥

tygers December 1 2009, 17:52:42 UTC

Thank you, dearest! I really wasn't aiming for something so sad, but it sort of came out that way!

I'm thrilled that you liked that line, it was the first thing that popped into my head when I was thinking of the prompt, and I just had to build a story around it!

dugindeep April 26 2011, 15:52:12 UTC

Such a nice slice of life here. I really love imagining them sitting there, Jared having to watch Jensen work no matter how long it takes.

riyku April 29 2011, 13:49:09 UTC

Sorry for the late reply...I've just come up for air from working on my big bang. This was fun to write--no high drama or conflict. Just two guys living a normal sort of life. Thanks so much.