fic: An Absence of Violence

[riyku]

Title: An Absence of Violence
Genre: Sam/Dean (pre-series)
Rating: R
Warnings: Hurt!Dean, borderline for underage.
Word Count: 1,900
Notes:  Thanks so much,

Comments

[heather03nmg]

Really well done. Hurty and awesome.

[riyku]

Hurty was the goal! Thanks so much.

[zagzagael]

Yes. Gorgeous and very nicely done.

[riyku]

Such a lovely comment. Thanks very much..

[saliel]

I love this, especially the ending.

"Dean brushes Sam’s hair out of his face runs a thumb along his ear in an act of uncharacteristic tenderness. Sam knows that Dean’s hands are built for punches, anyone could tell you that. But he also knows they’re made for this."

How Dean can be tender with Sam, yet aggressive and hostile with others!

[riyku]

Dean doesn't like people most of the time, does he? Well, except for Sam, and even that's a little shaky...It's great to know those lines worked. Thanks very much for reading!

[gutsparfait]

This is beautiful. It builds up nicely and the ending gives a lovely calm feeling.

[riyku]

Such a lovely note. I was going for something a little peaceful at the end there, and it's great to know that it hit the mark. Many thanks.

[cowboyangel]

This was lovely and bittersweet. The life they had at such a young age is sad but they had each other and that made all the difference.

[riyku]

Why do these boys always come out so angsty for me? I swear one day I will write schmoopy Winchesters. It's gotta be in here somewhere. Thanks so much, darlin'!