An Alternate Universe

Oct 16, 2016 01:48

I seem to have accidentally written a 733 word alternate universe thing.

Warnings: This contains some foreshadowing of things people may or may not have guessed at, but these events will not happen.

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aldersprig October 15 2016, 15:01:20 UTC
Oooooouuu (Even more curious)

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rix_scaedu October 15 2016, 15:28:23 UTC
Oh?

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kelkyag October 16 2016, 03:02:23 UTC
Well, that's a *fascinating* peek at ritual sorcery, and ... coordinated not-technically-ritual sorcery, even without context, because ... gack, what is going on here? But, AU.

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rix_scaedu October 16 2016, 06:28:13 UTC
They got invaded again....

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sauergeek October 16 2016, 04:35:31 UTC
I like that they're adapting enemy music -- including lyrics! -- to ritual magic. And that their choice of music may threaten the disruptors.

I'm trying to come up with a pop/metal song that included a dance routine, which makes me think of '80s hair metal, but nothing specific comes to mind. Both of my more recent thoughts -- Nirvana's "Smells Like Teen Spirit" and Lordi's "Hard Rock Hallelujah" -- have background cheerleader routines, but neither one looks like a dance that I'd expect to be able to turn into a defensive line. That sort of dance is more something I'd expect from Psy's "Gangnam Style" or Michael Jackson's extended "Thriller" video.

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rix_scaedu October 16 2016, 06:27:18 UTC
The re3quirement for what they're doing is to get everyone doing the same thing at once. Music and dance help.

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kelkyag October 16 2016, 18:57:51 UTC
Music and dance are possibly the best things for that. :)

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rix_scaedu October 17 2016, 08:13:39 UTC
Not directly.

Where this story does come from is my realization that most Hoshun would like amplified music, e.g. metal, where you can feel the beat in your gut and your bones - to them it would feel like the earth talking.

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